NEW STEVE SPAG - Re-Do (MUST READ)

[Steve Spag]

Just wrote this verse not too long ago. It's for this song I'm doing called "Re-Do", about bitches and shit, lol, but thought I'd post the verse to share it with you guys. This is probably one of my favourite verses I've written, just for the way it flows on the beat and the way it sounds with the chorus and everything. Let me know what ya' think though, any and all feedback is appreciated.

i need to know an answer, and I don't wanna doubt it//
Why is it that you're clownin'?, the whole town knows about it//
i guess we've had a fallout, a bout that you have started//
so get up out of my house you stupid peice of garbage//
i've gotten use to this, i'm really gettin' smarter//
i'm glad that you departed, you are soo damn retarded//
you wouldn't die for me, you ain't no holy martyr//
i would've died for you, and shit I would be goin' farther//
you always push my buttons, you tell me you don't love him//
i've given up on you, i know that you just can't be trusted//
you count up all my re-grets, they will amout to nothin'//
my life would be shit if i decided to be your husband//
i'm sick of all your poutin', you're only good for bustin'//
you always scream and shout at every little mean discussion//
and i don't need your drama, you just leave me disgusted//
i won't adjust to this so pack your bags and hit the busses//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

Leave Feedback Please

[Kez]

Sick

[Emadyville]

I thought it was pretty good. I felt the same mood through the whole verse which was good. Good work.

[neversnooze]

pack your baggs and hit the busses good one

i also liked this part

i'm glad that you departed, you are soo damn retarded//
you wouldn't die for me, you ain't no holy martyr//

overall it flowed great from begining to end
when can we expect this song to be up

[Solace]

Liked it too, yeah i love that line too

i won't adjust to this so pack your bags and hit the busses//

hilarious, and serious song good job as usual

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feedback guys, glad you all enjoyed that peice. I should be recording it sometime within the next couple weeks, as soon as I get my next paycheck. Once that's all done with though I'll be sure to up it on the audio stage.

[Ka0t1c]

peice - piece, whatever it's still good, peace

[Steve Spag]

peice - piece, whatever it's still good, peace

lmaoo
thanks man.

[Arabian Shady]

wiked, flow was spectactular, nice concept, playa shit,haha
nice vocab and you had a reali good structure there man,sick stuff
solid drop overall
Peace

[SajN]

Dope verse!

I have to quote everyone above me, because I totally agree with them


Sick!

[Steve Spag]

Haha, thanks for checkin' it out guys.

Much, much, much respect!