Beginning of A Verse

[Robbie G]

This is just the first verse of a song I wanted to do. Just wondering what you thought of it so far, even though I'd still probably switch it up a little bit for flow and stuff when I record. Not sure why I wrote about it, I was just writing off a line that I had in my head from before.



Let me explain something here, I respect every Muslim/
but I won't abstain from, dissing the radicals that some become/
because there's more jerks in this world, than in a hand spasm/
if your looking for the nukes, than Iran has them/
how can you be free, when your plagued by terrorism/
If it's terror that they want, then it's terror I'll give-em/
striking fear in the name of, a false religion/
cutting deep into lives, like a surgeons incision/
Killing in the name of God, for an unholy Jihad/
Muslims, Cristian's and Jews, breaking the bond we had/
I shake my head, as I watch them misinterpret the quaran/
resulting to quickly, to solve their problems with a bomb/

[Xray]

damn that's some real talk yo, the concept is pretty good. well written for sure. 10/10 for real.

[Robbie G]

Thanks.

[Darkblade44431]

nice beginning of the verse.
btw, you mispelled "Christian"..

[Robbie G]

Oh, firefox has failed me.

[Emadyville]

I like it. Different shit and you did it well. Continue it.

[notoriouS-K-M]

Dude it was pretty cool...........the material was good. I liked it

[Arabian Shady]

good concept bro, nice to see ppl catchin up
btw you mispelt qur'an as well, lol
Peace