story of my life

[shadyallday]

i grew up going to school daily/
my mom had me convinced there really was a tooth fairy/
i always had a sheltered life, whenever it felt like hell it helped to write/
at times i wanted to yell or fight/
before school, i watched saved by the bell alright?/
at school getting joked on was commonplace/
so i learned just to tolerate and not contemplate/
just go with the flow and dont over compensate/
i was always in a somber state/
there were some i would actually call my friends/
but it naturally condescends, how i would act irrational and be on defense/
and hear some remarks from the peanut gallery near the fence/
this is my life i dont expect u to understand, even if i had the upperhand/
i wouldnt want revenge/ it aint hard to comprehend, i would just corner them/ and show them all the fan mail thats pourin in/

growin up i never knew where i belonged/
when i was absent nobody cared i was gone/
all the chicks callin me a perv cause i'm starin at there thongs/
where'd i go wrong?/
my parents tried to keep me in check/
and teach me respect, maybe one day they wont breathe down my neck/
u dont wanna see me upset, i aint a serial killer, i dont even like wheaties or chex, i dont wanna do something i'll regret/
i cant decide should i alter my look/
all through high school, i wanted to author a book/
rappin is my state of mind, i wont stop til i see a greater sign/
i'll wait in line and wait for the haters to say they hate my rhymes/
i try to keep to myself, i'll reach out if i'm in need of some help/
after this u can probably relate to and see what i felt/
i cant believe i'm spillin my guts/ all i got is my word and my nuts/
if u heard i was nuts then i guess i deserve to be loved/

tell me what u think...

[lilrossy]

i thought it was alright. it had a nice flow and was a good story.