talkin tht shit

[tjb]

yea they talkin tht shit
y they trying to diss
i here em on the radio
an i throw up two fists cuz
they aint got no hits
they just got misses
an a whole line a hoes given them kisses
if i could take all the lil's from the south
id trade it all for a line from em's mouth
instead line afta line yea its gettin so old seein all them
niG*ga's wit there mouths full of gold
an if the rap game wa a poka game y dont these souther boys fold

[gladimnotsoluble]

that was pretty lame i gotta say..at least have some multies

[Solace]

that was pretty lame i gotta say..at least have some multies

yeah, what he said.

Heres the only lines that are like average:

if i could take all the lil's from the south
id trade it all for a line from em's mouth

And only average.

[tjb]

ha wever i rote tht up as i went.. as u could tell

[Solace]

keystyle ^

but still pretty average for one.

[Rain Matrix]

this is an occasion where if u took tha keystyle and re-wrote it
it had potetial to be badass but in this form it's okay just nyeah

btw why don't u put tha a in that

[JMG]

wow that was horrible, hardly made sence... how does someone have no hits but ur listening to them on the radio?

[tjb]

see i told u i made it up as i went it was horrible ima try harder next time especiallt cuz evryone says i have bad strutcure wat does thtt mean?

[JMG]

yea they talkin tht shit
y they trying to diss
i here em on the radio
an i throw up two fists cuz
they aint got no hits
they just got misses
an a whole line a hoes given them kisses
if i could take all the lil's from the south
id trade it all for a line from em's mouth
instead line afta line yea its gettin so old seein all them
niG*ga's wit there mouths full of gold
an if the rap game wa a poka game y dont these souther boys fold

to have better structure it should look more like this..

yea they talkin tht shity they trying to diss
i here em on the radio an i throw up two fists cuz
they aint got no hits they just got misses
an a whole line a hoes given them kisses
if i could take all the lil's from the south
id trade it all for a line from em's mouth
instead line afta line yea its gettin so old seein all them
niG*ga's wit there mouths full of gold
an if the rap game wa a poka game y dont these souther boys fold

[tjb]

thanx for advice

[tjb]

keystyle ^

but still pretty average for one.

whats a keystyle?

[Solace]

keystyle ^

but still pretty average for one.

whats a keystyle?

lol you just noticed my post? a keystyle is when you type up going along. Like a text freestyle.