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Keystyle!

Postby Solace » Nov 13th, '08, 02:57

I was bored, sue me.

Im the greatest, so dont start testing,
To be truthful I aint someone to mess with,
Im a police officer so you might get arrested,
So grab a girl and say show me your breasts, bitch,
before i through you in the best ditch,
You be speaking more gibberish than Lil Wayne with a swollen lip cause he got hit by a desk, BITCH,
The only reason I bust nuts on mics,
Is cause i cant get a girl, so music is my wife haha.
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Re: Keystyle!

Postby neversnooze » Nov 13th, '08, 04:40

for being bored this was actually good. the concept made sense and sorry about your girl problems, atleast you have a mic!! :y:

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Re: Keystyle!

Postby Emadyville » Nov 13th, '08, 05:21

I enjoyed it :y:
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Re: Keystyle!

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 13th, '08, 06:48

i love the concept .. it's good to relieve your stress in music . that's what i actually do .. what ever i feel inside .. i just try to make it on verse that rhyme .. well good post :y:
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Re: Keystyle!

Postby gladimnotsoluble » Nov 13th, '08, 21:23

shadymademe wrote:I was bored, sue me.

Im the greatest, so dont start testing,
To be truthful I aint someone to mess with,
Im a police officer so you might get arrested,
So grab a girl and say show me your breasts, bitch,
before i through you in the best ditch,
You be speaking more gibberish than Lil Wayne with a swollen lip cause he got hit by a desk, BITCH,
The only reason I bust nuts on mics,
Is cause i cant get a girl, so music is my wife haha.



LOL the last line is funny

You rhymed bitch 3 times in a row, the first time was great (arrested, breasts bitch)

You pump yourself up by saying your a police officer? lol not the best way to go


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Re: Keystyle!

Postby Solace » Nov 13th, '08, 22:21

Thanks all of you :worship:

and i rhymed bitch twice "breasts, bitch" and "desk, bitch". Glad you liked it tho :y: :happy:
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