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Verbal Attack (freestyle)

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Verbal Attack (freestyle)

Postby Requiem » Nov 15th, '08, 01:15

You can't hold me back, i'm on a verbal attack,
I got twenty in a knapsack from this old lady i jacked.
probly gave her a heart attack, but i didn't look back.
she probly still on the tarmack, laying flat on her back.
i just keep movin forward, i don't wanna back track.
I used to be part of the pack, now i'm on top of the stack,
and i'ma stay on track, not giving any slack.
tryin' ta make my raps, an' stop feeling so whack.
cuz i can still pursue my act, with my career intact.
And If i skinned a cat, how would people react?
or if my rhymes became abstract, what would be the impact?
and if i rapped about facts, would people give me flack?
or would i still be the exact same maniac,
i was when i joined the game, with no stats,
only a talent and a knack for using words in combat.

just trying to work on my rhyming :8)
Last edited by Requiem on Nov 16th, '08, 22:14, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Verbal Attack (freestyle)

Postby Solace » Nov 15th, '08, 01:16

Sick freestyle, i cant say much else. Liked how you freestyled it all back track attack etc...
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Re: Verbal Attack (freestyle)

Postby Requiem » Nov 15th, '08, 01:46

^thx for the comment. glad u liked it. i'm probbly going to record it. eventually :whistle:
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Re: Verbal Attack (freestyle)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 16th, '08, 17:06

ya man i agree .. i liked it .. lyrics and flow were great .. keep going ... :y:
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Re: Verbal Attack (freestyle)

Postby Requiem » Nov 16th, '08, 22:15

^thx man, i'ma write some more eventually. thx for checking it out :happy:
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