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Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 20th, '08, 17:14

what you literally do is different than what you say lyrically
and if this were true, i hope then it's a parody from the original
now listen for clarity: my wisdom grew from a system bewaring me
cuz when i entered right thru the center to share my key
they went to censor my clues from appearing free to your view
then quickly apparently they picked up those who didn't dare to flee
but they missed a couple so i swear i'll be equipped for the trouble
which is, i guarantee, kicked up to double now that many are aware of me
but i won't sit in a bubble, i'll get to coherently spittin, not mumble
cuz my mission's a charity to an eventually number bigger than popularity
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oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: different (unfinished)

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 20th, '08, 21:32

Your style amazes me....
The flow was perfect! :worship: :worship:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Different

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 20th, '08, 23:59

thanx for checkin it out, i also added a lil more to it which was missing and well deserved to be put in to make it even better... it has a great flow and vocab i must say, many multies
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Different

Postby neversnooze » Nov 21st, '08, 05:31

awesome bro, this was some poetic shit. what were you thinking when you wrote this
Sometimes I stay up so late that I have my morning coffee before I go to bed
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Re: Different

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 21st, '08, 08:51

i liked it , it sounds good to me :y:
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Re: Different

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 21st, '08, 15:32

neversnooze:
awesome bro, this was some poetic shit. what were you thinking when you wrote this


i was thinkin that i'm one of the few left with the gift of knowledge which i'm willin to spread across the world no matter how difficult my path can get for choosing to express what i feel b/c it makes everybody see the truth of life and "the man" hates it cuz he'd rather see us as robots working for him
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