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Lyrical Stomp

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 23rd, '08, 21:49

how will i get out of this hole which i have built up all on my own
well i wanna be known as one a role model, the other is shown
from a realm nobody can comb cuz you won't follow these poems
or bother to acknowledge me farther down my alleys and roads
cuz they prolly are bold, altering your boundaries towards home
cuz what i'm authoring's more cold than offering your soul
encounters with a ghost, i'm suffering for valuable goals
but i doubt they'll control me, over powering my outlet, oh no
allowed to appose and proud to expose: i'm loud to dispose
dark clouds that come close to surroundin my post
my ground has the most mounds diagnosed cuz my route i do coast
sprouts those who's hoaxed so now i'm 'bout to approach...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Lyrical Stomp

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 23rd, '08, 22:09

Kaotic wrote:how will i get out of this hole which i have built up all on my own
well i wanna be known as one a role model, the other is shown
from a realm nobody can comb cuz you won't follow these poems
or bother to acknowledge me farther down my alleys and roads
cuz they prolly are bold, altering your boundaries towards home
cuz what i'm authoring's more cold than offering your soul
encounters with a ghost, i'm suffering for valuable goals
but i doubt they'll control me, over powering my outlet, oh no
allowed to appose and proud to expose: i'm loud to dispose
dark clouds that come close to surroundin my post
my ground has the most mounds diagnosed cuz my route i do coast
sprouts those who's hoaxed so now i'm 'bout to approach...

This was good! I enjoy reading your writing. I've seen better from you though. :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Lyrical Stomp

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 23rd, '08, 22:43

it happens
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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