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True Story! .....

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 21:44

From:
Rain Matrix
Another All-Multie Weak Punch Swagger Jacker
the 9th of December....


Dear Santa,
i hope you Get MY WISH LIST n my non related gun TYPE "BISCUITS" but i want this GUY LIVELESS
See, i want Some NINE GUNS To "LIGHT UP" Or it aint gonna be ah very "BRIGHT" CHRISTMAS ( ='( )
cuz I Don't Have my MONEY UP or Ah "GUN" TO TOUCH Unless Im Talking Bout FIVE INCHES!!!!
Im Scared, See My COCKY SHIT Made Roc's 'NAUGHTY LIST' Cause i just aint "NICE" WITH IT!!!!!
J IS SCARED (YUP!) i know it! but i'd also like some STOCKINGS WHERE tha SOCKS IS WEIRD
Its ah Bit GAY I HEAR, BUT theyre all just NOT SINCERE & RAINS THA QUEER ONE
I AM ah swagger jacker, i gotta say sumit that'll MAKE THA TEARS COME So I'll Let YA'LL PREPARE..
For Chrstmas .. i Want Some MAPLE SYRUP & ah BOX OF BEER!!! (Ya'll Know He Loves My Style!)
I Aint Got tha PAY TO BE SHOPPIN, See, 'Im Broke'... like They Was BREAKIN MY BODY!!!!!
Bein GAY IS AH PROBLEM? Umm.. Regardless Santa.. For Chrstimas I Want J IN MY "STOCKINGS"!!!!
(Ps: Tell J I <3 Him)
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got it from tha fat man himself :o ...... haha aiight lemme do tha diss now ;)

That EIGHT FORCING With Tha MAC TEN So Like FAT MEN Just "WAIT" FOR IT (WEIGHT)!!!
J's THINKING.. See's If "RAIN'S THINKING"? We Call That BRAIN STORMING!!!/
HONEST HE TRYIN My Punches SOUNDIN LIKE SIRONS While All ur Lame Lines HOT AS AH HYDRANT
Roc? Aint Got ah 'Kid' But HES "APPARENT" To LEAVE YA "HAIR RED" If You TALKING BOUT "DYEIN"!!!
Kill Roc? if he "Hurtin tha envirement" then i guess "Mat ah Gas Car" like ALEX THA LION!! (Omg!)
(That BAR?) DUDE that mean he ah "CAR TOON"(Tune) Like RADIO SHOWS.. RAINY AH HOE!
See He SPITTIN LIES It's CHRISTMAS TIME So How We Gona See RAIN IN THA SNOW???/

lol... fuucckkkiittt ..... imma do my style .... if yall aint like variety to this site fuck yall lol

its Ez!
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Re: True Story! .....

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:16

:wave:
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Re: True Story! .....

Postby Solace » Dec 9th, '08, 22:36

J roc wrote::wave:

lol.

Okay i didnt actually like it but it was good :y: I aint gunna comment on the whole capital shit, i at least could understand.

"i hope you Get MY WISH LIST n my non related gun TYPE "BISCUITS" but i want this GUY LIVELESS"

Liveless, well im not 100% sure but im sure enough that its not pronounced in the way you can rhyme it with biscuits unless your a retard (and dont go all "well that means rain matrix could read it" shit)

Keep it up, and try to post some other shit. Its like all you can do is battle rap. Why dont you guys just have a rap battle in the rap battle section :unsure: I liked the rain in the snow line lol :y:


PS. How would you know if hes fat?
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Re: True Story! .....

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:39

shadymademe wrote:
J roc wrote::wave:

lol.

Okay i didnt actually like it but it was good :y: I aint gunna comment on the whole capital shit, i at least could understand.

"i hope you Get MY WISH LIST n my non related gun TYPE "BISCUITS" but i want this GUY LIVELESS"

Liveless, well im not 100% sure but im sure enough that its not pronounced in the way you can rhyme it with biscuits unless your a retard (and dont go all "well that means rain matrix could read it" shit)

Keep it up, and try to post some other shit. Its like all you can do is battle rap. Why dont you guys just have a rap battle in the rap battle section :unsure: I liked the rain in the snow line lol :y:


PS. How would you know if hes fat?


lol i thought it was ah word... my vocab isn't the greatest my bad lol .... but thanks for peeping :y:
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Re: True Story! .....

Postby James R. » Dec 10th, '08, 00:02

I liked the concept of it, but it was just more of the same, man. Take the feed from the last two and apply. You're gettin there.
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Re: True Story! .....

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 10th, '08, 01:24

santa's got a better shot at beefin with me than you do... your style is a little two outrageous for my taste, there is no point in finessing simplicity

never the less we see the return of sex with Caps Lock and punches that only do damage to my head because I had to read them in the first place

you type text battle like a crackhead smokes roc
do something productive champ :smoking:
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Re: True Story! .....

Postby J Roc » Dec 10th, '08, 03:33

Rain Matrix wrote:santa's got a better shot at beefin with me than you do... your style is a little two outrageous for my taste, there is no point in finessing simplicity

never the less we see the return of sex with Caps Lock and punches that only do damage to my head because I had to read them in the first place

you type text battle like a crackhead smokes roc
do something productive champ :smoking:


lol that's funny .... wasn't you peeping everything i dropped awhile ago??? lol .... i mean EVERYTHING .... & to say my punchlines ain't glorious lol ..... Even When you started using them after i did lol ... don't think i ain't notice ..... this beef for fun though ..... i didn't have ah problem with you when i started it :wave:
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