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Who Cares

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Who Cares

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 19th, '08, 06:37

I' m everywhere you look like a Chemtrail if your a hustler make Them Sales
way to fresh to End Stale I've Been Jailed expect me to die before my Pen Fails

these Desciptions are of Me Living like a killer in Remission free from Restriction
I'll never Be Hidden in a fake verse's Depiction of the very life I See Slipping

hopefully I can Hold On before my Souls Gone the pain is So Strong
on the mic I drop Those Bombs like I'm oil crazed and I Control Pawns

sorry but I call it like It Is can I get a Witness up in This Bitch
my words are Explicit but so is very Physics of the Business

I would never turn on my People hows that for an Ego
why can't you see the Evil running the life's of the Sheeple

watching the news cuz Their Scared mentally and Unprepared
for an alien invasion in the Air you might not Care if I Share

my Point of View it's a revolution Join the Crew
or surrender like general Burgoyne and Lose

I Manage Text that can Damage Heads I mean even hip hop was Branded Dead
call my words Candid Threats I stike fear into the hearts of men like Planet X
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Re: Who Cares

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 19th, '08, 20:43

sorry but I call it like It Is can I get a Witness up in This Bitch
my words are Explicit but so is very Physics of the Business


rest was good, only i notice again flow was weird, 1 minute you have a really long bar and then next second its over, only to see that the flow for the next set is a little different than others.it gets confusing man :unsure: lol
I found the quoted line pretty wiked, highlight of ur drop
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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