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Rapper/Killer

Postby lilrossy » Dec 21st, '08, 13:46

im insanely violent, look, im not in dis game to show benevolence,
throw pages at u from my notebook, don't need i mic, i'll kill u in silence,
how can i explain, the turn of every page leads u further into darkness,
open flames 'n' chainsaws takin aim, leavin ur body with scars 'n' markings,
dogs barking, lightning crashing, my foot steps on da floorboards squeak,
as u shriek, i emerge lashing, this is da nightmare u experience every week,
horrific as i appear, i'll go down in history with stories dat feed on fear,
the rapper dat moonlights as a serial killer, spitin rhymes of hatred through ur ears.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
-Copywrite
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Re: Rapper/Killer

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 21st, '08, 17:19

it's good .. i liked it .. :y:
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z_em = Slim Zaddy = Zaid AQ which is my real name
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Re: Rapper/Killer

Postby Ice_Scarred » Dec 21st, '08, 20:22

Str8 killer dude. You always write some dope shit.
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Re: Rapper/Killer

Postby lilrossy » Dec 22nd, '08, 08:47

thanks alot guys, appreciate the feed. im glad u liked it, otherwise i woulda had ta kill ya. :stretcher:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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