Ya'll CATS KNOW ROC SPITS In RAP NO PROBLEM Ya Crew Been HAD NO FLOSSIN
So How This ASSHOLE BALLIN When i Aint "Feelin Ya Kick's" Like u SHADOW BOXIN??..!!!/
Its Been DAMN SECONDS & I'm Barely-Assured If Ya'll "Carry-Tha-Four" .. Its Ah MATH LESSON!!
Ya Girl Always Has "CHATS" WITH DOME So My "SACKS AH PHONE".. Like Its JAZZ SESSIONS!!!/
TR SHADYS SICKEST Ya'll SAY HES VICIOUS But Cant Stand tha fire J BE SPITTIN??
I Could Look AT ENTIRE 'TOPICS' & Coudnt "PASS A FIRE" DROP IF It Was Help On BABYSITTIN!!!!
Wow So Far!!
Ya'll FUNNY AT SPITTIN .. DUMMY U THINKIN You GULLY AS HIM IS? Lmao!
yall got ah CREAM PROBLEM So if i Say Ya Whole TEAM "BAWLIN"??.. It Aint MONEY N BITCHES..No!!
(Actually..That Mean All Yall RUNNING LIKE BITCHES!) Yup Yup!
Really, Yall WISHIN U BAD But My Techs-Ah-Blow leave ya "Chest-Exposed" Like u STRIPPIN ON CAM!
& SMH!! @ All you SPECIAL FAGGITS Yall Like PENCIL BRANDS IS..Too Many "DIXON" YA ASS!!
Smh!!
Liighht!!/
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Bawlin
by J Roc » Dec 23rd, '08, 22:09
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=92003 .. Stricct Ame Diss
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=83388 ..Ft Spyder, X'd Up Diss
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=75635 ..Ft Yah Hah
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=64453 ..Scott Diss
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Re: Bawlin
by Jay-19 » Dec 23rd, '08, 23:54
Ok, you got some skills. But dude, please, write with small letters instead.
That crazy method you're writing in to show your rhymes, it honestly hurts my eyes.
You don't need to write like that, we CAN see your multies.
That crazy method you're writing in to show your rhymes, it honestly hurts my eyes.
You don't need to write like that, we CAN see your multies.
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Re: Bawlin
by MC Anonymous » Dec 24th, '08, 16:03
You are the undisputed punchline king. 
I want to see if you can actually do a verse that isn't battle rap though
9/10
I want to see if you can actually do a verse that isn't battle rap though
9/10
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Re: Bawlin
by Slim Zaddy » Dec 24th, '08, 16:11
MC Anonymous wrote:You are the undisputed punchline king.
I want to see if you can actually do a verse that isn't battle rap though
9/10
totally agree. your punchlines , are amazing man ,, nd ya why not doing a normal verse ,, cuz we hve seen ur skills in battles .. anyway gd job
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Re: Bawlin
by James R. » Dec 24th, '08, 17:49
Punchlines are pretty good man. I like it overall. 8/10. Stop using the caps lock. If people can't see your rhymes then too bad for them. If you need to explain your lyrics to people they should stop listening to music. Just write it and let them understand it or let it go over their heads. It's not your responsibility to baby people.
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Re: Bawlin
by Rain Matrix » Dec 24th, '08, 18:32
yeah you got talent but I agree caps lock is for blind fools
it's too bad all your worldplay revolve's around negativity
but like I said you got talent
it's too bad all your worldplay revolve's around negativity
but like I said you got talent
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Re: Bawlin
by mcZu » Dec 25th, '08, 01:42
It's sick in terms of punchlines, but wanna see you do some real concepts
Still enjoyed it
Still enjoyed it
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