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ugh hoes

Postby tjb » Dec 26th, '08, 23:55

fallllin apart like a handicap falls down stairs, or maby gets pushed ,watevr fuck u squares,
squares like shape, y am i so bent outta shape? ask my girlfriend or her OTHER boyfriend, shes a fuckin mistake,
two timed but like 4 the 1st time ,shoulda ended at the 1st line, cuz its goin down hill from here like a person when they choke down pills an drown themselves in beer no, some stronger liquor then so itill killl ya quicker,
fuck this maby suicide's the answer, or maby not becuz eventually theres cancer,
ill think ill end it right here cuz i dont want to rant...er just wanna get my point out pretty much across
but ima stay pissed off
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Re: ugh hoes

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 29th, '08, 19:42

,, it's good .. but fix the structure ..
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