NEW - Burn You Down (Feat. Ice Killa) *Modified Verse*

[Solace]

Ice put out my first track. Worst thing ever. We're gunna renew it, and hopefully it wont be as bad. We're using a Mister KA beat for it (the only track on my eventually coming tape that uses someone other than Ice Killa's production), called Hawk Em.

[Chorus]
Lyrically on fire, we'll burn u down,
Just like the World Trade Center when it fell to the ground,
You can't fuck with the lyrics we spit,
Try and bite and we'll feed you this lyrical clip.

[Verse 1: Epiphany]
You're a rapper that's sick? You should stop lying,
You're just going to "write lyrics or bite trying",
We rip through your shit with hardcore flows,
Bully you with our style, no need for sticks and stones,
So go home, you tried, me & Ice won't deny it,
Come back and diss us? No, don't even try it,
Run circles around you, you wouldn't believe it,
So fast you'd think it was a fuckin' track meet,
Rhymes are what your lacking, it's kinda funny,
You acting all pimp when you aint got no money,
My rhymes so sick when I spit my tongue ignites,
Flaming like a lighter, a riot is what I incite,
Calling me an amateur, man I ain't hearing it,
Make your pussy ass bleed as if you were on your period.

[Chorus]

[Verse 2: Ice Killa]
Yo, Epiphany, let me jump right in,
I got a few things to say to this bumpkin,
Yo, you think you can really roll with this,
Lyrical shit that we vehemantly spit,
You're nothing to this so don't come back and diss,
u a speck in the dust, the rest is just luck,
no talent u suck, on a mic u quack like a duck
let me crack a few bucks,
some 380's if u want to get fucked
You think you're sick, your just in denial,
You nothing but a pedophile trying to bite our style,
we fight with flows while u choke on blows,
we in control, we hardcore and cold,
Ur nothing but a cocky chicken, laying eggs in front of us,
I don't talk shit, i pop shit like a blunderbuss,
don't call me spittin' gangster, if u ain't one yourself,
I'm top dog bitch, you sitting on the bottom shelf,
and i don't need punchlines to lyrically murder you,
You say you're off the charts but I ain't never heard of you.

[Chorus]


For the orginal Burn You Down, look here:

[Requiem]

damn it's sooo much better htan the first 1. lmao i love how u ended the first verse. good job.

can't wait to get recordin

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

i wanna hear the recorded version of the first one... send me the link plz!!

[Solace]

i wanna hear the recorded version of the first one... send me the link plz!!

i deleted it off my comp lol. its too horrid to be heard. Not sure if Ice Killa has it.

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

i wanna hear the recorded version of the first one... send me the link plz!!

i deleted it off my comp lol. its too horrid to be heard. Not sure if Ice Killa has it.

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! LOL DAMN.

[Requiem]

^check the audio stage. it should still be floating around

[Solace]

^check the audio stage. it should still be floating around

links are dead.

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

yea i did i cant find it tho lol

[Requiem]

damn i still got it if u really want to listen to it. it sounds like death

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

i wanna hear death...

[Requiem]

here it is, ressurected http://www.zshare.net/audio/53377326b9050870/

beat SUCKS let me tell u. chorus is ok, verse 1 needs work. and quality on both is

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

yikes...uhhhh yea lol the beat=death and verse 1 probably needs more emotion but i read the remake of the song and REAL curious 2 how that turns out i was never gonna post this but ill just put my new track link right here so yall can listen to it for lettin me listen to that. i guess just give me some feedback homies. http://www.imeem.com/people/50KznKX/mus ... me_whywav/

[Requiem]

that really u? damn it's pretty sick. u should put it up in the audio stage.

we should collab sometime. cuz ur flow is sick as hell. good job on that track

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

yea i wasnt gonna release that till i recorded my lil ep that ive been workin on for the last 6 monthes or so. ill probably just keep it on this thread and whateva whateva. i think i have like 4 songs on imeem but thats the only one im probly puttin on my ep, i dunno though. i jsut wanna get close to 15 songs put down and pick the ones. im drivin down to atlanta tommorow morning from detroit and hopefully will get 3-4 tracks laced in the next week i dunno though im just always busy so we'll see. appreciate the feedback on it. but yea ive collab on 1 or 2 songs before but im not like hot shit at it but deff. down to do one so i can learn off others and help others tooooo or whatever sorry for typin so fuckin much lol

[Requiem]

^lmao. detroit if u see Em fly a flag with my name on it