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Sometimes this is what i think

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 09:31

I'm a lyrical pitbull, plentiful.. i shit stools,
my brain maxed out, yellin for the nurse...aye bitch the shits full,
War is not the issue, I'm runnin out of fuckin tolet tissue,
WHY YOU CRYIN BITCH, THE MUTHA FUCKIN CHANSAW MISSED YOU,
How many faggots gotta die, before im satisfied,
i hope elton john gets antaginized, by his raviged wife,
or hubby whatever the fuck he calls it, his ass is like a poker game, everything Always all in,
fuck am i really this evil, naa I just like the knockin up bitches, turn the other cheek and leave em



only 1 line doesnt have a curse word!! hahahahaha...well i hope you guys like it
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Re: Sometimes this is what i think

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 28th, '08, 09:33

haha damn. some lyrical fire there. i liked that poker line about elton john. very creative.i thought this was pretty good man.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: Sometimes this is what i think

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 09:34

-[Zach]- wrote:haha damn. some lyrical fire there. i liked that poker line about elton john. very creative.i thought this was pretty good man.

haha thanks homie
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Re: Sometimes this is what i think

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 10:24

Chet Starr wrote:well I'm pretty sure this is your most lyrical shit

rhymes were great man :y:

but I want to see you this lyrical while doing one of your deep tracks


^^^ that would make my balls melt

good shit :y:

haha thanks man...
Yeah i know im not the most lyrical rapper ever...to tell you the truth i don't even pay attention to multi's and shit like that anymore...but in the future ill deff make a few lyrical tracks man
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Re: Sometimes this is what i think

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 11:28

McMaybe wrote:Pretty damn sick man. Comedic, I like it. It's really entertaining, which Is what matters.

yeah haha thats what i am...an entertainer...thanks man!!
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Re: Sometimes this is what i think

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 28th, '08, 14:46

Hahahaha very nice
Very enjoyable writing, punchlines were the shit!
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Re: Sometimes this is what i think

Postby James R. » Dec 28th, '08, 18:59

McMaybe wrote:Pretty damn sick man. Comedic, I like it. It's really entertaining, which Is what matters.

Cosign on that. Gotta say I loved it.
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