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The Same (For a Reason Beat)

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The Same (For a Reason Beat)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 30th, '08, 10:34

This was written on the For a Reason beat by Joe Budden

I used a really similar flow (& similar rhymes) because i couldn't not haha, here it is anyways

Unliked, like no other, he's fool to most
an irregular kid, with hidden truth from most
yet he's willing, he's troubled, with no fuel to cope
a conformist, knowingly, he glues to most
how could one be so different yet so same as all
how could he live so different but feels the same as Nas
it don't make sense,
different lifestyles yet having the same pain being caused
see he adheres to rap but when he tries to write,
he loses his train of thought
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Re: The Same (For a Reason Beat)

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 30th, '08, 12:07

Damn man, that's one sick drop. I like the lyrics a lot, the way you present them is nice and the flow is cool aswell. I havn't heard the original track by Budden, but your version is pretty badass :y:.

Keep it up dude, I love reading your shit.
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Re: The Same (For a Reason Beat)

Postby James R. » Dec 30th, '08, 15:36

Why the fuck did you retire from writing? This shit is hot man. Extremely hot. So hot that I'd fuck it in the butt with no condom or lube. Great flow and vibe to this shit.
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Re: The Same (For a Reason Beat)

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 30th, '08, 15:39

very good piece... more...more!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: The Same (For a Reason Beat)

Postby mcZu » Dec 30th, '08, 18:40

Nice drop man, you really should keep on writing :y:
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Re: The Same (For a Reason Beat)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 30th, '08, 19:46

thanks guys, i just can't sit down and write like everyone else, when a spark comes, i do.
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Re: The Same (For a Reason Beat)

Postby Xray » Dec 30th, '08, 23:25

Told you it was dope. :smoking:

I agree with everyone else don't stop writing even if its like 1 verse a week or more just keep writing man, your a producer so it's a good choice to write, cause you can't always depend on people using your beats so sometimes you gotta get the job done yourself.
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