Maybe's Basement part deux

[<Stiiccy>]

I got a mic down here, lemma spit out some scary,
I just slipped over some blood and shit from a guy named larry,
though it is entertaining to jack off to the baby rapes,
asian bucakes... so much fuckin blood it could feel up like 2 lakes,
eww wait, theres so much more shit this jew makes,
a blood bath everytime he slips bitches roof-ies,
caged animals... its a scene of a horror flick,
went back to high school, and killed every bitch who ignored his dick,
there all torn to bits, even gettin joe rogan queesy from the gore and shit,
he turned Obama so white, and ate him like frosted flakes,
turned Bush so brown, and ate him like fuckin chocalate cake,
for fucks sake maybe, control your self, you just murdered presidents,
you cant afford this hell, well, might as well take a look at my self,
im next in line, MAYBE PUT DOWN THAT FUCKIN ELF,

[Robbie G]

Lmfao.

you cant afford this hell, well, might as well take a look at my self,
im next in line, MAYBE PUT DOWN THAT FUCKIN ELF,

[mcZu]

Funny shit

[<Stiiccy>]

Hahahaha dude... We're recording this.

haha you want to? we can prolly do it for your mixtape?

[James R.]

ROFL awesome

[Solace]

That was fucking awesome

[Requiem]

ending was classic

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks everone for feeding...haha im glad yall like it

[Arabian Shady]

hilarious
nice flow btw

[Xray]

I got a mic down here, lemma spit out some scary,
I just slipped over some blood and shit from a guy named larry,
though it is entertaining to jack off to the baby rapes,
asian bucakes... so much fuckin blood it could feel up like 2 lakes

^^Those lines were so obvious that your tryna be funny, its ridiculous, I'd rewrite those lines but the rest are good.

[<Stiiccy>]

I got a mic down here, lemma spit out some scary,
I just slipped over some blood and shit from a guy named larry,
though it is entertaining to jack off to the baby rapes,
asian bucakes... so much fuckin blood it could feel up like 2 lakes

^^Those lines were so obvious that your tryna be funny, its ridiculous, I'd rewrite those lines but the rest are good.

whats wrong with being funny?

[Xray]

I got a mic down here, lemma spit out some scary,
I just slipped over some blood and shit from a guy named larry,
though it is entertaining to jack off to the baby rapes,
asian bucakes... so much fuckin blood it could feel up like 2 lakes

^^Those lines were so obvious that your tryna be funny, its ridiculous, I'd rewrite those lines but the rest are good.

whats wrong with being funny?

Nothing is, but the song is obviously meant to be funny so I was looking for a bit more complexity in those lines being funny. But that's how I look at things.

[<Stiiccy>]

I got a mic down here, lemma spit out some scary,
I just slipped over some blood and shit from a guy named larry,
though it is entertaining to jack off to the baby rapes,
asian bucakes... so much fuckin blood it could feel up like 2 lakes

^^Those lines were so obvious that your tryna be funny, its ridiculous, I'd rewrite those lines but the rest are good.

whats wrong with being funny?

Nothing is, but the song is obviously meant to be funny so I was looking for a bit more complexity in those lines being funny. But that's how I look at things.

ill give you that the scary/larry rhyme is weak as fuck...but baby rapes/asian bucakes???!!!