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No Direction

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No Direction

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 30th, '08, 20:04

there's no directions to get where i am destined
so while i'm here in your presence
my soul will steer clear of what's reckless
cuz under control i'll appear it, i swear it
although many years have been hectic
i'm just sharin my lessons
from fallin down holes to repairin depression
i have followed my nose, yes i carry a message
cuz the route that i chose, now my tears i found exit
oh how does it go? well i buried what threatened
all on my own, my stairway to Heaven
what calls me back home, that's primarily my absense
allow me to roam and beware of my weapons
cuz fowl can be known, you aware i get answers?
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: No Direction

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 30th, '08, 20:07

Nice drop man. Another decent piece, the flow was really easy to get and it sounded real nice. Average wordplay but it works just fine.

Keep it up bro!
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