never kiss ass

[Ka0t1c]

i happen to have the weapons
a lab, a pen and a pad
so i'm reppin what i am
and i've been on this land
that is spinnin as a man
beginning like a second
and right this minute my plan's
to end my depression
it's my prison understand
i should live with expression
and since my mission is grand
my gift's never absent
so i lift up my hands
flippin off at them
kissin on ass
cuz this is my anthem

[Arabian Shady]

i like it man, ending was good, not as good as the bald eaagle 1 tho
flow was good, rest was ayte

you actually posted like 5 verses!!!! daym bro

[Ka0t1c]

yeah, those first 3 i wrote on paper during x-mas, that was when i didnt have my computer, just got it back today

[MC Anonymous]

I didn't feel this, surprisingly o_O

[Rain Matrix]

your verses are very poetic, deep, and meaningful
this one was no exception... write on my friend

[Xray]

Not a fan of the structure, it complicates the flow, here's how you should structure it for people to figure out the flow, cause when I see a new line I take a break than read next line.

i happen to have the weapons, a lab, a pen and a pad
so i'm reppin what i am, and i've been on this land
that is spinnin as a man, beginning like a second
and right this minute my plan's, to end my depression
it's my prison understand, i should live with expression
and since my mission is grand, my gift's never absent
so i lift up my hands, flippin off at them
kissin on asscuz this is my anthem

^^I get the flow better when structured like that, its not your best post not your worse either, it's average cause I doubt you even tried on this one.

[Ka0t1c]

you're right about both structure and effort... thanx for your feedback