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Many Ballads Need To Be Written

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Many Ballads Need To Be Written

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 4th, '09, 19:43

acutally i try to come up wit a full song ,. it's way short ,, but that what was on my mind ,, , feedback appreciated

V1:
One too many ballads need to be written,
People don't get that life is ment for livin',
It's not like it can be conjured in a kitchen,
Is bloodshed really required for "snitchen",
well maybe,
It starts with one ballad and rolls thru two,
Catch four more and see what it does to you,
Follow to Heaven and ask GOD how do you do?,
Caught in your own corruption, the reply is nothin,
are you followin'

chorus: X1
This is for the ones six feet deep,
An eternal sleep,
One too many ballads,
This is for the ones six feet deep,
An eternal sleep,
One too many ballads,

V2:
You start to front and you cant see nothin from behind,
Shit builds up inside but you play emotionally blind,
Phyciatric help? na that ain't for you,
If your caught in your own lie, how can you be true?,
The Why,
It's a new season, more names lost for no reason,
Just to be appeasin', to another power hungry cretin,
People sleezin' with ease an this is just intellectualy speakin',
And i say... why?... I don't know.

chorus: X2
This is for the ones six feet deep,
An eternal sleep,
One too many ballads,
This is for the ones six feet deep,
An eternal sleep,
One too many ballads,
This is for the ones six feet deep,
An eternal sleep,
One too many ballads,
This is for the ones six feet deep,
An eternal sleep,
One too many ballads,

hook: X1
Tell me why, Tell me why,
Tell me why, Tell me why,
People have to interfer and die,

V3:
No need for me to speak to myself anymore,
I've come to terms within this grievence galore,
As seen me from the roof to the floor,
Hard to make a way to end this song,
Except that im ~gone~, stop givin reasons to make ballads,

chorus: X1
This is for the ones six feet deep,
An eternal sleep,
One too many ballads,
This is for the ones six feet deep,
An eternal sleep,
One too many ballads,

hook: X1
Tell me why, Tell me why,
Tell me why, Tell me why,
People have to interfer and die,
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Re: Many Ballads Need To Be Written

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 5th, '09, 18:59

thanks man ... glad you liked it bro ..
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