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Crumbling Life

Postby Solace » Jan 5th, '09, 01:32

Frustration releases, best friend deceases,
Poverty increases, all hope decreases,
Children with diseases, killing is caprice,
Dark clouds surround, happiness is out of reach,
Teenagers snorting coke, guns rule out all the peace,
All they see is drugs or handcuffs and the police,
Terror never ceases, the parents never preach,
And the result is a creature selling weed, full of greed.
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Re: Crumbling Life

Postby Urban Punk » Jan 5th, '09, 13:12

i like that, made me think :happy: and the ending was great keep it up dude
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Re: Crumbling Life

Postby Solace » Jan 5th, '09, 22:09

Urban Punk wrote:i like that, made me think :happy: and the ending was great keep it up dude

:o Thanks man, you got some nice writings too :y:
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