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Bleh.

Postby Solace » Jan 9th, '09, 02:23

Just realized i havent written shit in a while.

The flows of my rhymes are just equivalent,
To that of a tidal wave, my concept's ambivalent,
I just let it take me through every line, every rhyme,
Something eventually strikes me every time, every try,
The pen hits the paper, written emotion is portrayed,
Sorrow is a blade, my anger goes off like a grenade,
Make those who step up fade, but that never happens,
Cause everyone's afraid and skill is what they're lackin',
They make me laugh, while I make them cry,
Equal trade offs, in a way, every time they try,
I'm done with this, I'm rusty but it's not an excuse,
I can face that I ain't the best, but losing I will refuse.
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Re: Bleh.

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 9th, '09, 04:52

don't give up man... ain't nobody the best were all masters of our own game
that's real talk just like this was a good drop :y:
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Re: Bleh.

Postby lilrossy » Jan 9th, '09, 07:39

nice drop man, i really injoyed readin it man. keep it up. :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Bleh.

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 9th, '09, 13:21

looks good . nice shit , i liked it .
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Re: Bleh.

Postby Solace » Jan 9th, '09, 14:20

Rain Matrix wrote:don't give up man... ain't nobody the best were all masters of our own game
that's real talk just like this was a good drop :y:

Thanks Rain, i appreciate it :happy:

lilrossy wrote:nice drop man, i really injoyed readin it man. keep it up. :y:

Thanks :)

z_em wrote:looks good . nice shit, i liked it .

Thanks man :happy:
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