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Postby mist15806 » Jan 10th, '09, 00:38

this was a verse i wrote for a song a while back, i don't remember exactly how long it's been. well, rhyme free nyc was the crew's name but not anymore....truthfully i don't even know if it still is o_O. lol. decay is the name i go by so yeah. my friend and i were bored so we decided to sound conceited :p tell me what you think and what i could work on.

pause the beat, cause a scene, raw to the extreme,
combine the three to a dynasty-end up with rhymefree nyc,
we be fillin the gap and bringin it back with skills that you lack,
hit with impact this is somethin that you only wish you had,
just put me on the hook of this song and i'll leave y'all shook,
leavin me out of that part can only make ME off the hook,
i ain't re-spons-sible, for your fuckin troubled memory,
cause appearantly just killin a track would be another felony,
but remember me, i'm crazy enough to say i'll create a grave,
well i better be, it only makes sense since my name's decay,
they say i'm ill in a dangerous way i guess i'm contagious,
the infection of my venom is more deadly than aids is,
be afraid to anger me all i gotta do is take you to reality,
crush you with the weight of gravity and maim you telepathically,
i'm out of my mind i GOT to know where my brain is at,
cause i can act exactly like a phychotic megalomaniac,
i'm pretty much already at the finish line, so don't get started,
i got the world hot from feelin my rhymes, it's global warming,
cause i told them all that, i was gonna spit explosives,
and since i'm above y'all i'm droppin bombs and clips like a soldier,
disarm you till i recieve a late feedback let's face facts,
i beat you till you can't react now who's able to relax?
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Re: nameless lol. can't think of one

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 10th, '09, 00:47

nice drop :y:
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Re: nameless lol. can't think of one

Postby mist15806 » Jan 10th, '09, 20:18

thanks man :)
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Re: nameless lol. can't think of one

Postby lilrossy » Jan 11th, '09, 03:13

good work, i liked it. it was a good read and it flowed nicely. keep it up :y:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: nameless lol. can't think of one

Postby mist15806 » Jan 13th, '09, 00:04

thanks, i appreciate it :D
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