Beats Keep Banging

[Mr.Maximum]

Verse from a song that i ended up not recording but i still might
feedbacks cool

everything changes but the beats keep banging
everyday lifes dangerous, bitch do you speak my language
english ! whatever you say, just understand you fake it?
an i'll take this rap past wax smash tracks for days bitch
the son of god, the devils protege i will never go away
i sell my soul today forever let my flow just rage
my lifes an open cage, this is the maximum show ok?
so know lil old jose going to deal that dope thats insane
i was wack then my head got clapped unintact
now combats all that keeps me from collapsing in these slacks
rap city maniacs got the sticks blazing when we relax
its life on crack strike a match and watch it fucking catch
she entered the picture just a little out of focus
said i was wounded just didnt know it so she exposed it
next thing i know i'm floating my heads feeling swollen
heart torn open, the victim of something you dont notice

[Requiem]

i like it man. it's not incredible, but it has a nice flow, and the rhymes are good.

nice to see a new face 'round the creative writing corner

[Mr.Maximum]

thanks man, and yeah its nice to be here lol

[Ka0t1c]

it's alright, you got some skills already, just gotta learn em better, keep it up