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Keystyle 1-15-09

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Keystyle 1-15-09

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jan 15th, '09, 07:53

I haven't written in ages, but someone I know imed me saying he posted raps on thisis50.com and was killing shit so I checked it out, made a account and posted a few lines yesterday to one up him (dude's ok but his raps are pretty lame) and just posted 6 lines. I figured I'd take the last 6 lines I keystyled and add to them right here right now:

All you dudes suck huge nuts more than used sluts
lube up, I'm anally probing you, I'm deranged and I know it too
So insane with this flow, I knew I'm a maniac since birth
you're all so lame with rap it hurts to read the shits
delete your scripts, you're too weak to spit, keep it zipped
actually, let my penis tip meet your lips, now eat a dick
I'll leap and slit the wrists of friends and foes alike
I'm contempt to flow and write since I've been condemned to hold a mic
by a relentless poltergeist, who since than stole my soul, my life
I'm defenseless,cold as ice, my life's pretentious,I hold a vice
I've been told tonight's the night to choose good or evil
but I'd rather rule the people, they're fools and feeble
I need a tool, an easel, so I use a writing tablet
but when I write, entice my habit, I ignite the fabric
of time, I unwind, than recite some magic
and as my words combine in rhyme....I vanish
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Re: Keystyle 1-15-09

Postby Mr.Maximum » Jan 15th, '09, 07:55

dope :y:

the end was my favorite part :worship:
You mothafuckin' chickens ain't brave enough
To say the stuff I say, so just tape it shut
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Re: Keystyle 1-15-09

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 15th, '09, 08:21

amazzzing :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Keystyle 1-15-09

Postby Dark Blue » Jan 15th, '09, 15:10

wow that was GREAT :worship: and this is pretty crazy and funny--) :worship:

ThomasAguanis wrote:All you dudes suck huge nuts more than used sluts
lube up, I'm anally probing you, I'm deranged and I know it too


ThomasAguanis wrote:you're too weak to spit, keep it zipped
actually, let my penis tip meet your lips, now eat a dick
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: Keystyle 1-15-09

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jan 17th, '09, 04:23

thanks for the feedback :worship:
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Re: Keystyle 1-15-09

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 17th, '09, 04:37

ThomasAguanis wrote:I haven't written in ages, but someone I know imed me saying he posted raps on thisis50.com and was killing shit so I checked it out, made a account and posted a few lines yesterday to one up him (dude's ok but his raps are pretty lame) and just posted 6 lines. I figured I'd take the last 6 lines I keystyled and add to them right here right now:

All you dudes suck huge nuts more than used sluts
lube up, I'm anally probing you, I'm deranged and I know it too
So insane with this flow, I knew I'm a maniac since birth
you're all so lame with rap it hurts to read the shits
delete your scripts, you're too weak to spit, keep it zipped
actually, let my penis tip meet your lips, now eat a dick
I'll leap and slit the wrists of friends and foes alike
I'm contempt to flow and write since I've been condemned to hold a mic
by a relentless poltergeist, who since than stole my soul, my life
I'm defenseless,cold as ice, my life's pretentious,I hold a vice
I've been told tonight's the night to choose good or evil
but I'd rather rule the people, they're fools and feeble
I need a tool, an easel, so I use a writing tablet
but when I write, entice my habit, I ignite the fabric
of time, I unwind, than recite some magic
and as my words combine in rhyme....I vanish


I'm contempt to flow and write since I've been condemned to hold a mic
or I'm content In contempt to flow and write since I've been condemned to hold a mic
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Re: Keystyle 1-15-09

Postby enjinn » Jan 17th, '09, 04:47

cool
each one teaches one
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Re: Keystyle 1-15-09

Postby Solace » Jan 17th, '09, 05:32

as they said that was pretty dope man!
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