Bringing it back on.

by **James R.** » Jan 16th, '09, 05:06

That was sick man. I LOVED these lines:

cause everybody has a whip to lavish, I'm driving a diplomat,
and I'm tired of listening to "this is what you wish you had"...
I guess being half black is half of enough...
should I be out dealing weed or something... jacking a truck?

That was hot. I'd tell you to keep it coming, but you make me look bad :shifty:

by **Emadyville** » Jan 16th, '09, 06:25

Plus the hate is always useful for the fuel to the rhymes...that was fucking sick, loved the whole thing tho, that line just stood out.

by **Ka0t1c** » Jan 16th, '09, 06:36

8/10 bravo!!!! pretty good shit to write, you got a nice song there...

by **Purple23Haze** » Jan 16th, '09, 07:17

McMaybe wrote:I only wrote the first verse for now. I'll finish this later ; )

INTRO
Fuck driving a porch... Or spiking a whore...
I'm here for one thing and one thing only! You bitch.

HOOK
I've expanded a platform
from pages on rap forums
to making a track song
and bringing it back on
That nice shit...
Now drop it like it's hot...
That like this...
Now this is what I got...

VERSE
I'm happy for you, never jealous of accomplishments,
think of me as having a baby after adopting kids...
cause everybody raps.. yep.. now we get to see the news,
I guess the cost to live just happened to be drastically reduced,
cause everybody has a whip to lavish, I'm driving a diplomat,
and I'm tired of listening to "this is what you wish you had"...
I guess being half black is half of enough...
should I be out dealing weed or something... jacking a truck?
acting all tough? but my Jew powers are useful at times...
plus the hate is always useful as the fuel for the rhymes,
beautiful dimes... excluding pocket change, dropping her dead,
and stock exchange your boxers for the top of her head...
it's mystical wizardry magic... instantly disagree magnum,
doesn't make you last longer, only decreases the passion...
plus she was a pole jumper... nobody will know, dump her..
baby? leave the body in the back of a zoned dumpster...

HOOK
I've expanded a platform
from pages on rap forums
to making a track song
and bringing it back on
That nice shit...
Now drop it like it's hot...
That like this...
Now this is what I got...

BRIDGE
Marriage is only optional... So are emotions...
if you think it's love it's probably what you ate in the morning,
it's only having sex if shes awake and aware...
so taking it bare... while she's passed out is playing it fair...
I bet shes beautiful, as smart as a door knob,
Insecure, she'll bitch a bit but sucks like a porn star...

Honestly everything was dope don't say my shit is too just cause of this but I didn't even read the chorus sorry but every line was inticing I think this is the piece I read all the way thru since 2003