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Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 16th, '09, 06:58

I'm diggin deep into my arsenal an article of clothin sheedin my skin when I did I win'd spinnin
I Stay sinnin whats with you women Kaotic MC anonymous I spit porper shit droppin like scholar idiot
Nitty twit this is a conniption fit without droppin the buisness hope I get a witness
Not your wetness but bitches I'da kept it
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Re: What

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 16th, '09, 07:10

Chet Starr wrote:when calling yourself a scholar...try not to misspelled like 7 words :laughing:

scholasr are born not made k man
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Re: What

Postby James R. » Jan 16th, '09, 14:25

Terrible. You spelled half the words like you were typing with your ass. I mean come on... win'd? It's won homie. And just wow... what the hell were you on when you wrote this? You've been writing for 10 yrs and you drop this?

Am I the only one who's getting a serious SacJB MVP vibe from this guy?
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Re: What

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 16th, '09, 16:53

wow, somebody's "furious!" go cry to your mommy, you panzy
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: What

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 16th, '09, 21:42

It's called creative writing and it was supposed to win a wind creatively became win'd
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Re: What

Postby Solace » Jan 16th, '09, 22:01

Purple23Haze wrote:It's called creative writing and it was supposed to win a wind creatively became win'd

What the fuck did you just say? :confusion: :unsure:

That is a horrible piece by the way :flower:
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Re: What

Postby neversnooze » Jan 17th, '09, 04:24

Usually when i read short verses there alright to best, but like your title i had to ask "what" was this.

sorry purple i did not enjoy reading these 4 lines, it didnt even flow. If you do decide to write again better luck next time :wave:
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Re: What

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 17th, '09, 04:29

neversnooze wrote:Usually when i read short verses there alright to best, but like your title i had to ask "what" was this.

sorry purple i did not enjoy reading these 4 lines, it didnt even flow. If you do decide to write again better luck next time :wave:


JUST remember to check all mine like you heard thru the grape vine!!!
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Re: What

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 17th, '09, 18:32

You sir are what we here at this beutiful establishment at trshady like to call a "dumb fuck" someone who starts bullshit for no reason...
Now sir I'd like to introduce myself...I'm Sticcy, about a week and half ago I murdered one of the sites better rappers...
How hard do you think it would be for me to kill one the weakest ones that has ever came here?

mother fucker you wanna talk big...talk about sticcy...talk about mcmaybe...

dog im beggin you...say somthin else
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Re: What

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 17th, '09, 19:13

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:You sir are what we here at this beutiful establishment at trshady like to call a "dumb fuck" someone who starts bullshit for no reason...
Now sir I'd like to introduce myself...I'm Sticcy, about a week and half ago I murdered one of the sites better rappers...
How hard do you think it would be for me to kill one the weakest ones that has ever came here?

mother fucker you wanna talk big...talk about sticcy...talk about mcmaybe...

dog im beggin you...say somthin else


Whatever all I did was post and all this shit started cause I didn't lay down and accept the fact that you guys think I'm garbage I wouldn't expect you too why would you even think I would~ you wanna kill me I'll die a fucking warrior then I'll haunt you to your fucking grave BITCH!
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Re: What

Postby Solace » Jan 17th, '09, 20:20

Purple23Haze wrote:
XXStiiCCyXX wrote:You sir are what we here at this beutiful establishment at trshady like to call a "dumb fuck" someone who starts bullshit for no reason...
Now sir I'd like to introduce myself...I'm Sticcy, about a week and half ago I murdered one of the sites better rappers...
How hard do you think it would be for me to kill one the weakest ones that has ever came here?

mother fucker you wanna talk big...talk about sticcy...talk about mcmaybe...

dog im beggin you...say somthin else


Whatever all I did was post and all this shit started cause I didn't lay down and accept the fact that you guys think I'm garbage I wouldn't expect you too why would you even think I would~ you wanna kill me I'll die a fucking warrior then I'll haunt you to your fucking grave BITCH!

this is the internet retard, not a battlefield :laughing:

and no you aint murderer so dont act hard.
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Re: What

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 17th, '09, 20:38

Epiphany wrote:
Purple23Haze wrote:
XXStiiCCyXX wrote:You sir are what we here at this beutiful establishment at trshady like to call a "dumb fuck" someone who starts bullshit for no reason...
Now sir I'd like to introduce myself...I'm Sticcy, about a week and half ago I murdered one of the sites better rappers...
How hard do you think it would be for me to kill one the weakest ones that has ever came here?

mother fucker you wanna talk big...talk about sticcy...talk about mcmaybe...

dog im beggin you...say somthin else


Whatever all I did was post and all this shit started cause I didn't lay down and accept the fact that you guys think I'm garbage I wouldn't expect you too why would you even think I would~ you wanna kill me I'll die a fucking warrior then I'll haunt you to your fucking grave BITCH!

this is the internet retard, not a battlefield :laughing:

and no you aint murderer so dont act hard.


I never said I was a fuckin murderer damn no respect
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Re: What

Postby James R. » Jan 17th, '09, 20:44

You're not a warrior either, so if you die you'll die a talentless bastard more or less.
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Re: What

Postby Solace » Jan 17th, '09, 21:21

Purple23Haze wrote:I never said I was a fuckin murderer damn no respect

You don't deserve respect from a piece of shit. In other words, that's why your mother never cared for you.
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