Verse.

[mcZu]

A verse I wrote in 6-7 minutes... Didn't include a chorus..

I will never part hip hop....I will be forever there
Me without it would be like breathing without air
Microphone as token of appreciation for hip hop
Never leave her alone I’m the omen of none stop
Infect the beat like a virus while I put down syllables
In fact I beat up mc’s with this papyrus forged with minerals
Fiber constructed with opposite nonsense with sense
Of optical sensors while I position my ink I withstand
All which is not considered pure to pure lyricism
So with these sentences I open up tombs of exorcism
Existing treats will exit while I persist that they will rest
Not in peace so R.I.N.P in the shadows of my ink’s lashes
Massacre them with a pen while they write with mascara
Acres filled with miles of anger fluid flowing with máscaras
Hiding behind the ink I dropped a while ago on my notebook
Striving to find the sink of this verse so I can flow into the hook

Feedback would be much appreciated.

[Solace]

That was some nice stuff man! Keep it up! Favourite lines:

Me without it would be like breathing without air

Infect the beat like a virus while I put down syllables
In fact I beat up mc’s with this papyrus forged with minerals

Thought it kinda fell off in the end but its still good

[mcZu]

^ Thanks bro, glad you enjoyed reading it.

[MC Anonymous]

Flow was a little shaky in the middle, but the rest of the verse was fire.
Great job, love the poetry in this.