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Walk The Night Alone

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Walk The Night Alone

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 19th, '09, 21:31

I think thoughts, as I walk the night alone,
I hear the waves of the ocean, move in the softest tone,
It's lonley, but yet a romantic night,
Can't find a solid relationship, due to organic fright,
I just wish, I could find my special one love,
I don't kno who to blame, myself or the lord above,
As the sand spreads through my toes, tears stream from my eyes,
I just wish for one night, I could be a hansome man in disguise,
I just wish, true love.. would give me 1 chance,
And I could find the girl of my dreams now in advance,
More tears begin to show, I can't stand to be lonley,
I only wish for once, I had someone to hold me and console me,
But I don't, and every lonley night it breaks my heart,
But I notice, between sleep and my job, my lifes pulled apart,
As I continue to walk the night alone, I get sadder and sadder,
I think of love, and every step is a step up the ladder,
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Re: Walk The Night Alone

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 20th, '09, 06:43

Chet Starr wrote:awesome shit man :y:

the theme was just great, and so were the lyrics :smoking:


thanks chet . much appreciated bro.. and glad that you liked it :y:
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Re: Walk The Night Alone

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 20th, '09, 09:25

you definitely got the emotion in your words, so i feel this one...

you just keep it really simple, yet get your meaning out well :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Walk The Night Alone

Postby James R. » Jan 20th, '09, 21:44

Great man. I loved the emotion. I loved the simplicity of it coupled with the emotion in your words and the natural flow of the lyrics. Nice job man.
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Re: Walk The Night Alone

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 21st, '09, 15:58

James R. wrote:Great man. I loved the emotion. I loved the simplicity of it coupled with the emotion in your words and the natural flow of the lyrics. Nice job man.


thanks james , much appreciated bro .. :y:


you definitely got the emotion in your words, so i feel this one...

you just keep it really simple, yet get your meaning out well


thanks man , glad you liked it
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