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Postby shadyallday » Jan 26th, '09, 19:50

u know im the best in the booth
why wouldnt u say im the best?, its the truth!
why wouldnt u expect me to toot
my own horn, all these mc's dont respect my intellect or the rap methods i use
just imagine tryin to step in some shoes
that r too big, and when u battle ur expected to lose
what the fuck do u expect me to do?
im a go work on some raps, perfect my craft-- until im better than u!

all these sucker mc's keep fuckin with me
they mad im dope as fuck, u know whats up
evrybody knows im gon' blow up!

i got introduced to the game and fuckin blew up
u got abused in the game, waitin for ur 15 minutes to be used up
theres no denyin that u suck
everybodys afraid i'll do something alarming
piss off the wrong person by just sayin the wrong thing
i dont rap for the paper
i spit the raps that'll make ya, say "hes the shit, i cant be a hater"
u only wanna rap for the paper
u go to the clubs like "can i rap?" uh...no i'll get back to u later
im not a bad person
i just get mad when u say im erratic, sporatic and i tend to act nervous
its just i love to rap, i have a knack for it
these critics put everything i spit under a microscope
they mad everything i spit on the mic is dope
but they always try to misquote
if i contemplate suicide, they dont think twice to find me a rope
in the back of my mind, man i hope
the fans dont turn on me like "damn i dont like what he wrote"

i rap circles around my opposition
on wax, i murder all my competition
i cant relax i want everybody on the block to listen
to my shit, cause its hot, i want to be in the top position
not at the bottom without a pot to piss in
how do u expect to get connects in the business?
when u cant get any record exec's to listen
or any A & R's to pay attention
i dont gotta sell my shit out the trunk of a car
u wanna say shit?, see this gun, get the fuck out this car!
when it comes to rap, i try to raise it not go under the bar
i went multi plat, ur shit went nothing so far
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Re: sucker mc's

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 26th, '09, 21:06

cool, wow, i didn't expect this to be put together so well since i don't even see u around here, but it's a good drop, i liked it :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: sucker mc's

Postby James R. » Jan 27th, '09, 01:09

Pretty consistent with your stuff. Structure was everywhere, flowed well after the 2nd time I read it, rhyming was good, not the best I've seen here, but definitely above average. 7/10
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