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Tis been a LONG time

Postby MuNxMuN » Jan 28th, '09, 02:50

Was written for my myspace layout but may be recorded if I write more. I haven't written since freshie year so feedback is appreciated :)

09 It’s our time to shine
Better live it up cause you know can’t rewind
can’t change time so stay true to the friends you find
fun while it lasted but it’s time to move on
continue even through dawn
Almost at the end of the road
walk through it with what’s been bestowed
upon us it’s not luck we won’t muck up
We’ll be there in june to say it
and tell everyone we made it!
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 28th, '09, 03:31

it's not bad at all I hope you write more man and like Mcmaybe said it is quite catchy
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Postby Solace » Jan 28th, '09, 03:45

Rain Matrix wrote:it's not bad at all I hope you write more woman and like Mcmaybe said it is quite catchy

:smoking:

It was okay.
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Re: Tis been a LONG time

Postby gutawafang » Jan 28th, '09, 03:52

Cool man. It does make me reflect.
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Re: Tis been a LONG time

Postby MuNxMuN » Jan 28th, '09, 04:19

Epiphany wrote:
Rain Matrix wrote:it's not bad at all I hope you write more woman and like Mcmaybe said it is quite catchy

:smoking:

It was okay.


Atleast one person here knows I'm a FEMALE :p


thanks for the feedback you guys :) I don't really see how it's catchy though :sweating:
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Postby James R. » Jan 28th, '09, 04:24

It is very catchy. I like it.
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Re: Tis been a LONG time

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 28th, '09, 04:52

Lol.... this wasn't catchy to me... yall sucking up lol
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Re: Tis been a LONG time

Postby James R. » Jan 28th, '09, 05:13

I got a red name. I aint gotta suck up to shit
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jan 28th, '09, 05:19

MC Anonymous wrote:Lol.... this wasn't catchy to me... yall sucking up lol



different people have different opinions. I don't think it's catchy and i wrote it :unsure:
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Postby Emadyville » Jan 28th, '09, 05:43

James R. wrote:It is very catchy. I like it.


Agreed :y:
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