Aspects Of L.O.V.E (Featuring SLMacDougall)

[Slim Zaddy]

Z_EM (Verse)
Love and affection implanted on top of my mind,
I stop and I find my minds erection is one of a kind,
I start backing into the passing when we were laughing that day,
It was real feelings no acting everything was going our way,
We felt the same everything in sync my heart on the brinks,
and to think I had thought this feeling had gone extinct,
You see I been hurt before left with my heart on the floor,
Explored some more got to the core and discovered yours,
We're meant to be but there's a but you see and the problem being,
Is he's keeping you from me so I’ll make him disappear like Houdini,
A true being at heart and my heart was yours from the start,
You must be holy girl cuz you always light me up when im dark,
Raise my spirit in lifting hold me steady while the sands shifting,
Keep me from quitting when I flow wrong you stop me from drifting,
I love you no questions .but the problem remains present,
You're not receiving the message and im not receiving the blessin,
All I know is I want to be there to flaunt you,
But when I bring it up you miss the point that im on to,

Chorus
I remember when she laughed so hard that she cried,
I remember when she grabbed my heart with her eyes,
I remember when she first thanked God for her life,
Now, I just wish that she could remember mine,


SLMacDougall (Verse)
do you know what it feels like loving someone that's in a rush to throw you away?
it's like Enrique says, i was the last one to know the lock on the door had changed
it drove me insane, wasn't i the one who took you to Spain, and in a private plane?
you said your feelings had changed, but i say you were just playing me like a game,
and you threw my heart down the drain, and now i cry whenever i hear your name,
don't you see, what you have done to me!? I'm on my knees, see, i can barely breathe!
you just let my heart bleed! like it was in a sieve, hurting me, at the slowest speed!
i can't forgive you for what you went and did, i hope that when you reminisce,
you will scream, and i also hope that my face appears in your mind when you kiss!
i break down and i cry, there is not a single hope in the sky, what happened to you and i,
was something i could never see happening in my eyes, i despised all the lies,
i just wish i wasn't too blind, to see the signs, i should've known that it was good-bye,
there was you telling me, that it was destiny, but now i can't even see you next to me!
i will remember this, all of it, from the first, to the very last kiss, i'll never rest in peace!
so all i can do is grieve, and i grieve, and i keep grieving, i grieve, you don't wanna see me,
i sleep, and i don't wanna be me, all i can see is your face like a screen on my ceiling..,

Chorus
I remember when she laughed so hard that she cried,
I remember when she grabbed my heart with her eyes,
I remember when she first thanked God for her life,
Now, I just wish that she could remember mine,

[Slim Zaddy]

[MC Anonymous]

This was very good, Z_em your flow was pretty good, structure was good, lyrical quality was down, emotion quality was real up. I've seen better from you though.

Scott your verse was incredible, lyrically fire, emotion was great. Structure was a little weird, I think to stretched, flow was not damaged to badly. Excellent verse.
8/10

[Slim Zaddy]

This was very good, Z_em your flow was pretty good, structure was good, lyrical quality was down, emotion quality was real up. I've seen better from you though.

Scott your verse was incredible, lyrically fire, emotion was great. Structure was a little weird, I think to stretched, flow was not damaged to badly. Excellent verse.
8/10

thanks MC Anonymous ,, thank for checkin in out , much appreciated bro

[Emadyville]

Damn, very deep shit, I can relate, good hook too, I loved it

[James R.]

I'm really feeling it. I think it needs some touch ups here and there, but I like it. The emotion was cool. Content was good as well. Flow was on spot. I liked both verses. I'd give it an 8/10. Good job.

[Slim Zaddy]

thanks guys , much appreciated , glad that you liked it ..