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I Won't Let You Go

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I Won't Let You Go

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 29th, '09, 00:41

Everyday I walk, I get smacked back in blocks
crack the lock, my life is broken, I'm in shock
I can't stand it, misery is in my brain
torture and suffering, to thin for names
for sin a game, is just broken hearts
spoken darts, I don't feel my swollen parts
open shards, slash my wrists with spite
grip the slice, bleed right into night
strings and cords, my life is planted
slanted knives, I try but blasted
I cry inside, for I must remain a boy
sighs do hide, unable to retain my joy
died a kid, all because I tried to hid
gashed wide by this, you paid my bid
I loved you, now you run away
say it once more, as we go our seperate ways.

I've never cried, as much as I did today
tears fell down, I kneel down and pray
please forgive, I never did you wrong
sing this song, can we all get along x2

Alone, beaten, smashed, and she doesn't care
I needed to leave, I just couldn't be there
my tears are found, my years are drowned
fear goes around, sound lies to my hounds
entities, looking down at me with shame
if this was a game, then why am I sane
I can't take the pain, I just want to die
haunting eyes cry when by my side
dimming lights, heaven rejects my soul
now subject to coal, I burn in holes
yearn for love, eyes a well of tears
spell the fear, not so swell to ears
hear my voice, forgive me so I may
end my life a boy, slip into the days
grip onto my grasp, you let me go
if I do die, you'll never forget me though.

I've never cried, as much as I did today
tears fell down, I kneel down and pray
please forgive, I never did you wrong
sing this song, can we all get along x2

An author of life, tales of the great
failed cause' of weight, filled with this hate
I lost my light, at a cost of morals
a story with no end, only quarrels
vision black and white, is this right?
no color without light, can't see my sight
I tried to mend, only made it bend
for fate it ends, no matter what you send
I will always have you, in my heart
from the start, I wouldn't ever break apart
You were like a sister, now your gone
for my farewell, I'll give you this song
I have never hurt more, then I am now
may you see how sincere I am now
I'll continue to hold, until you let go
till' then I just wanted to let you know.....

I've never cried, as much as I did today
tears fell down, I kneel down and pray
please forgive, I never did you wrong
sing this song, can we all get along x2
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: I Won't Let You Go

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 29th, '09, 10:14

pretty good MC . i like the concept , and the way it's structured , pretty good .. nice rhymes too .. good job over here .. :y: :b:
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