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reneagade freestyle,

Postby Slovinec » Jan 30th, '09, 05:52

i put my verbs in the same place were i keep my birds .
and release them when im in rage, outta this cage
i cant remember this shit,
thats why i wrote on a page
i sound illmatic for eating all these lays
i know this bitch goes bad im fucking up my age
so reverse this shit back and put it on tape
cause im ripping my skin off when i masturbate
i mastered this ape, realized my tru faith,
from this good helping aid, ima put it in play
and kill myself cause im already dying from aids
nomore grades, to fuck up my additude all day.
this freestyle has no meaning like a gay,,, sorry to say
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Re: reneagade freestyle,

Postby gutawafang » Jan 30th, '09, 06:01

Cool! I could flow by the way. :y:
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Re: reneagade freestyle,

Postby Slovinec » Jan 30th, '09, 06:04

since u reply to my stuff the most, you a bro or girl,, and im ryan thanks
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Re: reneagade freestyle,

Postby gutawafang » Jan 30th, '09, 06:07

Hi Ryan! Fish here. Yeah, I'll continue ta feed your rhymes man.
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Re: reneagade freestyle,

Postby Slovinec » Jan 30th, '09, 06:19

aight homie, ill try the same from you.. i would post more rhyme i got on the comp, but im to budy farming on guild wars :worship:
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Re: reneagade freestyle,

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 30th, '09, 16:56

i liked it ,, it flowed well :y: :y:
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