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Addiction

Postby survce » Jan 30th, '09, 05:59

My mind all ways racing back and forth I keep pacing
Because of my habit's my life has been nonfiction
My thoughts are blurry almost blank to prediction
These drugs I keep taking only hide the pain I'm embracing
It's so hard to explain It's my life that I'm wasting
I can't be alone here anyone feel a connection
If so then can you answer some of my questions
I need help with an addiction this goes without saying
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Re: Addiction

Postby gutawafang » Jan 30th, '09, 06:02

I guess this is from your heart? HAHA. Nice rhyming to reflect on your life. :y:
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Re: Addiction

Postby survce » Jan 30th, '09, 06:08

Yes it's got the truth about me all over it. I tried not to go to deep.
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Re: Addiction

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 30th, '09, 11:35

it's nice .. good emotions in it :y:
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Re: Addiction

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 30th, '09, 14:33

You're improving. I'm seeing it. I recommend you begin to learn how to master multies. If you need help add me on MSN I'll help you out. gothik_knives@hotmail.com :y:
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