Motivation Locked

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

my motivation is locked in chains like a prisoner locked in jail
trying to get up do whatever to step up but every try will fail
the mind seperates cuz on one hand i want to write
but the other path is possessed by this demon inside
which won't let me breathe the creativity that's sleepin in me
which won't let me free to face the reality that's waitin for me
this period of time will passe by so I can unfold like a butterfly
the demon under control but i still strike harder than a butterknife


uhh yeah...

[gutawafang]

great. i feel it man. i mean, i'm experiencing these thoughts too. i mean, i wanna write something like this too.

overall, an inspiration for me. 10/10.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx guta ^^
didnt expect i get any feed glad it helped you someway

[SajN]

I am feeding this only because you feed my lyrics on MSN, otherwise I wouldn't because you don't feed other people here


Anyway, this wasn't your best man. Hardly any multies, or not at all
Not so complex, and I think it was rather boring.
I liked the first line though.

I know you can better.


Now feed other members

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx for readin SaJN...hehe...

[mcZu]

I enjoyed reading it, just the flow was abit shaky imo. Lyrics were great, loved how you expressed yoursefl there. Rhyme-pattern was good aswell, overall a good piece which I enjoyed
Keep dropping man, I only see you drop audio's

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah rather spit my lyrics and put them on audio then puttin them in CW section
and thx for readin man...

[Xray]

my motivation is locked in chains like a prisoner locked in jail
trying to get up do whatever to step up but every try will fail

I liked those lines, rest was alright to. Good drop, least your being more emo about things.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

xD haha...