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Rape A Child.

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 4th, '09, 00:39

Flip the switch to erect the youth like porno
and I don't need pills to make my horn grow
whipe the slate, with a tissue to my unborn kids
one punch got you on the floor shakin', must be sids
leave the red rocket explodin' with white like dynamite
when I ripped up her asshole, she cried that night
I don't care, she can disappear into this thin air
took off her bra, covered with crabs and pinned hair
disgusted, I took out my gat and shot her 9 times
she aint 50 cent, fallacies won't keep her alive
she died, on the hunt for another little girl to swipe
found one, tied her up, put my dick in, pearly whites!
she screamed, ''Angel, why have you done this''
bitch, cause ya vaginal discharge orange like sunkiss!
spray disinfectant, reach my finger in the quagmire
''what the fuck?'' I said,''it keeps going higher and higher
take it out, ''Oh my fucking god! Bitch stinks like fish''
slice her clit off, send it to china, a now gourmet dish.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Rape A Child.

Postby gutawafang » Feb 4th, '09, 02:34

Fuck it. Perfect story. I have it all imagined in my mind. This is TOTALLY THE thing.

Yeah, storytelling :y:
Flow :y:
Multi :y:
If rapped out :y: :y: :y:

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Re: Rape A Child.

Postby Solace » Feb 4th, '09, 02:47

Hahahah that was fucking hilarious! Good shit man, but I kinda felt like you were biting Maybes swagger :o Haha keep it up :y:



Was this about me? :shifty:
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Re: Rape A Child.

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 4th, '09, 03:06

Thanks all :y: . I wanted to lighten the forum up with a nice humorous post. :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Rape A Child.

Postby gutawafang » Feb 4th, '09, 03:08

MC Anonymous wrote:Thanks all :y: . I wanted to lighten the forum up with a nice humorous post. :y:


LOL. It's not humourous if I show this to my fellow Singaporeans. They might even report this shit to the board of censorship, and it'll escalate to being broadcasted in the news.

But hell, i feel this shit man.
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Re: Rape A Child.

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 4th, '09, 04:51

so you're a rapper/raper? :n: :n:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Rape A Child.

Postby James R. » Feb 4th, '09, 22:58

Well I fed this last night on here and it didn't post, then I told you how I felt on MSN, and you threatened me. So I fed it AGAIN on here last night and it didn't post. Now I'm just going to get pissed off if this doesn't post.

I liked the flow of it, it was very creative, it was extremely entertaining and funny, the structure was good as always, the multies and vocab were there. Everything was on point but it was way funnier than the shit you've posted before. Good job on this. You're my favorites rapper's favorite raper.
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