The Color of Love (EXTENDED)

[mcZu]

Not bad considering that you not used to dropping poetry, would advise you to try to put some more vibe in it. Some energy that moves people when they read it, try to write from different angles and see what kind off poetry suits you best. And while your at it, try to mix it with some rap lyrics, trow in some mutli-syllables and some more metaphores.
But I enjoyed reading it and keep dropping bro

[James R.]

I actually like it. I like the analogies you used when describing the colors mostly. The flow was good, structure was cool. I don't read a lot of poetry, so I may not be an expert, but I know for a fact I liked this lol. Good job man.

[gutawafang]

NICE ONE Coleon. Great metaphors.