We Know Skill, Feat. McZu

[MC Anonymous]

I'll slice your face with more sharp razors then Motorola
a solar nova, hotter and makin' bubbles like coca cola
raise aroma's, so you can sniff defeat like shoe polishers
astonish me, so I can break weak bars like a demolisher
rap my fist around your face, a gift wrapped punchline
stay with the heat, and rush your crib like it's lunch time
attack with hot lines to cause more stress then suicide
it's you or I, in the belly of the beast it's only do or die
a clueless ride, now you green and lonely like Steve
put my barb wire on ya chest to make it hard to breathe
who wants some, come here so I can hand out addition
stay with strategically placed letters like a wordplay tactician
who needs the flames, my rhymes are they own power source
meet you in the streets and drown you like a shower course
accelerate with microns, although you can't see or feel real
I still appear sealed in skill, with out an Achilles heel.
...We know Skill....

Sun Tzu fused with Zu, chemicals filled with tactics
Moon full above; I view the laws of lyrical ass kicks
Articles with sparkling after shocks baffles each face
So I articulate the mandate I build upon this rap base
Better throw up your hands like its five past eleven
V-power engine pumping blood trough each seven
The haemoglobin containing hero oxygen so breathe
And my lyrical piece like the index and middle seeks
Skill which I already own and because….…..I’m a boss
You saying ‘’who go?’’ …and flipping rounds like a toss
Heads up and tails down ‘because I’m directing this orchestra
Death’s upon wack mc’s, loosing is like Arabs at a bar mitzvah
Impossible, improbable, biological tendencies…. to bite thus,
The illogical science of a desert wolf with the wings of Icarus
Been flying above….. since the C-section behind the Abs
So I’m ending this without stressing the well known facts….
…We know Skill…

[ThomasAguanis]

The first verse was better,in my opinion. The second seemed to make a lot less sense and flowed weird. Both had a few lines that didn't seem to flow properly to me, but that's in the eye of the beholder. Multis were pretty good in the first verse and not quite there in the 2nd. The comparisons were a lot better in the first verse too. The whole "we know skill" concept could have been used differently. I expected it to be something like "we know skill because we're this and that blah blah etc." Overall it was pretty good though, so good job to both of you.

[MC Anonymous]

The first verse was better,in my opinion. The second seemed to make a lot less sense and flowed weird. Both had a few lines that didn't seem to flow properly to me, but that's in the eye of the beholder. Multis were pretty good in the first verse and not quite there in the 2nd. The comparisons were a lot better in the first verse too. The whole "we know skill" concept could have been used differently. I expected it to be something like "we know skill because we're this and that blah blah etc." Overall it was pretty good though, so good job to both of you.

Thanks dude! I'm first verse and he's second to clarify. We took the route of showing what type of wordplay we can do. Thanks for the in-depth feed man, always appreciated.

[James R.]

The first verse was better,in my opinion. The second seemed to make a lot less sense and flowed weird. Both had a few lines that didn't seem to flow properly to me, but that's in the eye of the beholder. Multis were pretty good in the first verse and not quite there in the 2nd. The comparisons were a lot better in the first verse too. The whole "we know skill" concept could have been used differently. I expected it to be something like "we know skill because we're this and that blah blah etc." Overall it was pretty good though, so good job to both of you.

Awesome feedback and I agree completely.

To add to it, I think the 2nd verse felt a lot more forced with some of the rhyming which also threw it off.

[Slim Zaddy]

it's was good though , rhyming scheme is pretty good , multies were there and great , the concept is nice , you keep it to the point , i agree with the others that the 1st verse was way better in term of flow , rhymes , multies .. but they both were good , nice collab , gd job for both of ya MC & McZu

[mcZu]

Thanks for the feed people, and you are right. Halfway I got stuck and just rushed it, so I kinda forced a couple of lines. Gotta give it more time and let the creative aura finish it, anyways I appreciate the feed and the fact that you guys read it

[Solace]

i aint gunna go in depth here, it was ill