Aint no average MC survival of the fittest

[Purple23Haze]

I’m anything but average, rap Atlas!
Holding the up world, my status!
Act passive, the massive tactics!
hit your asses graphic, Asterisks 2!
Slow as molasses, sugar added, true!
Add crashes, crack heads
Save your asses, disastrous
and dead back cash cribs
Acid trip, the battlest rip, a fascist quick
Faucet’s, turned on, no need for gossip~
But turn your pussy lips on
get em ready for deposit, warm
headed for the perfect storm
You have just been forewarned
What is that you want from me
From A to B rap is at least E Z e
Survival of the fittest it’s vivid
Loose lips sink ships it’s mimicked
So keep it zipped snitches make a visit
Let me trust you for just one minute
Let me find that I’m more morbid
Than a tortured soul I’m unsorted
Queens courted so I can’t be a King
Make a man out of me complicates things
We had a black president nominated
Inaugurated with a lot of people
wanting him on the pavement
Jaw separated twitter patted I’m just sayin’


From A to B rap is at least E Z e

[gutawafang]

No flow. I can't rap it out. Structure's not visible.

We're headed for the perfect storm
You have just been forewarned this was good though.

Keep it up man!

[Solace]

You werent really saying anything, it was a bunch of meaningless lines. Flow is off in areas, or not flow should i say, the rhyme scheme. eg.

I’m anything but average, rap Atlas!
Holding the up world, my status!
Act passive, the massive tactics!
hit your asses graphic, Asterisks 2!

Atlas, Status, Tactics - they all rhyme. Then out of the blue comes Asterisks 2. Your good with the multies, just focus on a good subject matter. Try talking about poverty, or something about yourself like your family, personal life etc.