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just a keystyle.....

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just a keystyle.....

Postby spitz2 » Feb 10th, '09, 23:31

yo im the illest to step to the planet/
when i come thru ya town ya get left in a panic/
its expected to plan it but nah its jus a keystyle/
n i got that key style to leave emcees piled/
in a fuckin trash heap n slap freaks on they ass cheeks/
and any past beef i cooked seasoned n ate/
and that jus maybe the reason ya hate/
come thru ya house at dinner start eatin ya plate/
and the dessert nobodys keepin the cake/
and that could be a robbery line about snatchin money/
but half the dudes that do that money rap is dummys/
nut splashin tummys of all the fine chickys/
my dick be like ripleys when i jizz free/
and u cant get me cuz im unreachable/
i could keep goin but im done teachin you/
some speak it true but those are the unheard/
like all the emcees from the three one third/
like royce n marv my voice is charred/
from spittin fire with my poisonous bars/
fuck boyz n the hood n boy like boys n the yard/
skippin thru flowers im strippin dudes power/
but fuck my fingers hurt now so i may as well stop/
but ill still keep murderin beats until im in jail caught/

ahh iono, jus felt like rhymin
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Re: just a keystyle.....

Postby Emadyville » Feb 10th, '09, 23:48

Not bad, i enjoyed it, held my interest lol, good job :y:
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Re: just a keystyle.....

Postby Spyder » Feb 11th, '09, 00:43

pretty good. now u should come and battle me
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Re: just a keystyle.....

Postby gutawafang » Feb 11th, '09, 00:59

Good man! :y:
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