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New leaf... On Life's Tree.

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New leaf... On Life's Tree.

Postby The Toy Soldier » Feb 11th, '09, 03:19

yo its time to hit back the homies
wit a new rap cuz you got to know me
the new me: the one thats making a comeback
while yet i kickback i still hit the qurterbacks
with a sack and a rap thats got the potheads back on crack
terrorizing pacifists into the midst of war
all while making a lady out of a cum deadly whore
see im turning the tables back on my life
just made my girlfriend into my wife
and sure theres still evil out in the world
and what am i gonna do about it? nothin fuk the world
let the waves crash down into the city
cuz right now im a lil bit busy
i aint got time for sissies
who want me to go green man fuk them pussies
this about me livin my life
having it all like i be t i
rapping is just how i express it
it aint my world cuz i just do this for fun
getting in and out of wraps yeah I meant that Pun
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Re: New leaf... On Life's Tree.

Postby The GameKeeper » Feb 11th, '09, 20:19

yur gettin better kid... keep writin.
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Re: New leaf... On Life's Tree.

Postby Solace » Feb 12th, '09, 01:35

Iunno maybe its me but it really didnt impress me. Im sure youve done better before, this just didnt impress me with the slant multies, and I couldnt catch the flow and the rhymes were just bad. Sorry dude
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Re: New leaf... On Life's Tree.

Postby The Toy Soldier » Feb 12th, '09, 05:45

Epiphany wrote:Iunno maybe its me but it really didnt impress me. Im sure youve done better before, this just didnt impress me with the slant multies, and I couldnt catch the flow and the rhymes were just bad. Sorry dude

its cuz ur not used to me being less sentimental bout it
but thats aight ill try harder.
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