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Writer's Block

Postby Solace » Feb 12th, '09, 02:15

I try to write a piece, but a thought will not travel,
From the depths of my mind to paper, buried under gravel,
Writers block, an invisible line of chalk, I can't see it,
Out of my vision, out of my sight, and yet I need it,
It's deceiving, on the tip of my tongue, well I'm done,
Engraved, small writing in my brain, a clouded sun,
A lost boy in the woods, every tree covered by mist,
At risk, not missed, as if he had never ever existed,
Any rhymes? I got none. Any lines? I lost them,
Paper's nothing without words, lyrical mind has got numb.

I cant really think of anything to write so i wrote something about not being able to write. lol.
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby gutawafang » Feb 12th, '09, 02:50

"A lost boy in the woods, every tree covered by mist," :y: good shit here man.

I guess you're the type who has rhyming as a hobby. :happy:
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Solace » Feb 12th, '09, 22:32

gutawafang wrote:"A lost boy in the woods, every tree covered by mist," :y: good shit here man.

I guess you're the type who has rhyming as a hobby. :happy:

Thanks :)
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby neversnooze » Feb 13th, '09, 05:52

this was a good write. epiphany i can relate with everything you said. i used to write like everyday but lately my mind is empty, its like i said everything i wanted to say.

anyways good job on the write, if your like me, wait for that inspiration. 8/10 :flower:
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Solace » Feb 13th, '09, 18:02

neversnooze wrote:this was a good write. epiphany i can relate with everything you said. i used to write like everyday but lately my mind is empty, its like i said everything i wanted to say.

anyways good job on the write, if your like me, wait for that inspiration. 8/10 :flower:

Thanks man, im glad i could relate to you. Makes me feel like this piece wasnt just a waste. Hopefully you get inspiration back ;)
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby mcZu » Feb 13th, '09, 22:03

I liked it, I have been trhough a writers block and it sucked. But you described it pretty vividly :y:
Flow was consistent, rhyme-pattern was great aswell and the overall lyrics are enjoyable.
So good job on that and keep on dropping :y:
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Solace » Feb 13th, '09, 22:11

mcZu wrote:I liked it, I have been trhough a writers block and it sucked. But you described it pretty vividly :y:
Flow was consistent, rhyme-pattern was great aswell and the overall lyrics are enjoyable.
So good job on that and keep on dropping :y:

Thankss :happy:
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