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Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 14th, '09, 21:40

So Many ennemies,so many Memmories
So many Fellonies,I used to be the funny G
BUt now things changed,They just make me Go BANG
but now im Raged,They are like OH MAN
i tried to help you a BIT,in the motherfukin STREETS
Cuz u are fkn WEAK, so stop sucking some DICKS
people are like please change your fkn heart
you think you'r SMART?u a fkn RETARD...!
As u read above they got no fate,see what they fkn turn Me
I show em love they fkn show me hate they fkn burn me
Another Journey another attourney,Learn me fkn Turkey Murkeeey jerky EARN ME!
you talk a lot of shit,but you was never ill No
go straight suck a dick,Cuz i pay ur moms Bill YO!
sayin it aint no beef,fkn Faggot.. ur still HOMO !
Sayin u did no efforts faggot, But we all know though
So,ur mom suffered Maggot?thats why ur a real known HOE
YOu just Throwin some lines, and make it sound as hot as mine
when its not Fine,stop lyin and Find a Good Rhyme
say "that shet aint Mine,i cant rap im a fag i should Remind
My self to Go Shine,in pop music" but like if i Would Mind
Epiphany stop givin Signs,of gayness as u you could everytime
to show How much you love that dude,this aint a nursery : Blind!
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby Solace » Feb 14th, '09, 21:50

That was horrible, no flow, horrible structure, below average rhyming, no punches, and you evidently have no clue how to spell. And rofl@ your diss to me:

"Epiphany stop givin Signs,of gayness as u you could everytime"

Uh did you just repeat "you" on an already shitty line?

And as Coleon said, i have no problem with coming and ripping you a fifth or sixth asshole, I've lost count how many times Coleon beat your ass.
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby mcZu » Feb 14th, '09, 22:03

I kinda feel ashamed 'cause my girl is from Tunisia....fucker, stop degrading your country with those wack ass rhymes.....
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby Solace » Feb 14th, '09, 22:03

mcZu wrote:I kinda feel ashamed 'cause my girl is from Tunisia....fucker, stop degrading your country with those wack ass rhymes.....

:laughing:

Burned :y:
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 14th, '09, 22:08

mcZu wrote:I kinda feel ashamed 'cause my girl is from Tunisia....fucker, stop degrading your country with those wack ass rhymes.....

this is a lie lol :y:
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby Solace » Feb 14th, '09, 22:08

le tunisien wrote:
mcZu wrote:I kinda feel ashamed 'cause my girl is from Tunisia....fucker, stop degrading your country with those wack ass rhymes.....

this is a lie lol :y:

No, your "talent" has to be the lie here.
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby mcZu » Feb 14th, '09, 22:10

Epiphany wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
mcZu wrote:I kinda feel ashamed 'cause my girl is from Tunisia....fucker, stop degrading your country with those wack ass rhymes.....

this is a lie lol :y:

No, your "talent" has to be the lie here.


Lmfao

Naah I didn't lie, it's true. My girl is from Tunisia, but like Epiphany already stated, your so called talent is a lie.
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 14th, '09, 22:14

Epiphany wrote:
le tunisien wrote:
mcZu wrote:I kinda feel ashamed 'cause my girl is from Tunisia....fucker, stop degrading your country with those wack ass rhymes.....

this is a lie lol :y:

No, your "talent" has to be the lie here.

you shut it, your section is Design not Rap :)
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby mcZu » Feb 14th, '09, 22:17

^Your section is not even catogorized....it's way to fucked up
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby Solace » Feb 14th, '09, 22:19

le tunisien wrote:you shut it, your section is Design not Rap :)

I'm sorry did anyone see an anteater try to diss me?
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Re: Faggots ( Coleon diss )

Postby Slovinec » Feb 14th, '09, 22:36

wow u bite u loser


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