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Postby gutawafang » Feb 15th, '09, 18:20

Go ahead and have fun analyzing this. Cuz I think it's WAY TOO EASY to. If ya'll can analyze sentence by sentence, RESPECT! :happy: :happy: :happy: LOL. :flower:

Love is like a metal detector
Love is like a bed of roses
Love is like a sea of clownfish
Love is like a gang fight
Love is like a can opener
Love is like an email address
Love is like a conspiracy
Love is like an air conditioner
Love is like a car
Love is like a knife
Love is like a lion
Love is like Leah Dizon
Love is like Minerva
Love is like a pocket
Love is like a piece of chocolate
Love is like a planet never visited
Love is like school
Love is like beauty.
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Re: love is like...

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 15th, '09, 18:56

gutawafang wrote:Go ahead and have fun analyzing this. Cuz I think it's WAY TOO EASY to. If ya'll can analyze sentence by sentence, RESPECT! :happy: :happy: :happy: LOL. :flower:

Love is like a metal detector >>>
Love is like a bed of roses
Love is like a sea of clownfish
Love is like a gang fight
Love is like a can opener
Love is like an email address
Love is like a conspiracy
Love is like an air conditioner
Love is like a car
Love is like a knife
Love is like a lion
Love is like Leah Dizon
Love is like Minerva
Love is like a pocket
Love is like a piece of chocolate
Love is like a planet never visited
Love is like school
Love is like beauty.


okay i will analyze it ,, but i'm off right know .. so i might write staff , that make no sense at all

Love is like a metal detector >>> it's hard to find someone you can share true love with
Love is like a bed of roses>>>> it's a bed of roses , cuz red roses represents love ,,
Love is like a sea of clownfish>>>> cuz these days love is Scarce
Love is like a gang fight>>> it's hard to stay alive ,, if you're not tough enough
Love is like a can opener>>>> it's easy to love someone , but hard to forget this someone :p
Love is like an email address>>>> it's located everywhere ,, we all love
Love is like a conspiracy>>>>
Love is like an air conditioner>>> when you're feeling hot, it' cools you
Love is like a car>> it's moves your emotions
Love is like a knife>>> cut's your heart
Love is like a lion>>>> it's fast and rough

well that's what i came up with .. :wave: :wave: :smoking:
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Postby neversnooze » Feb 15th, '09, 20:01

fish your way is simple like poetic. what z_em recommended is a perfect example of improving your write.

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Re: love is like...

Postby gutawafang » Feb 16th, '09, 06:12

z_em wrote:
okay i will analyze it ,, but i'm off right know .. so i might write staff , that make no sense at all

Love is like a metal detector >>> it's hard to find someone you can share true love with
Love is like a bed of roses>>>> it's a bed of roses , cuz red roses represents love ,,
Love is like a sea of clownfish>>>> cuz these days love is Scarce
Love is like a gang fight>>> it's hard to stay alive ,, if you're not tough enough
Love is like a can opener>>>> it's easy to love someone , but hard to forget this someone :p
Love is like an email address>>>> it's located everywhere ,, we all love
Love is like a conspiracy>>>>
Love is like an air conditioner>>> when you're feeling hot, it' cools you
Love is like a car>> it's moves your emotions
Love is like a knife>>> cut's your heart
Love is like a lion>>>> it's fast and rough

well that's what i came up with .. :wave: :wave: :smoking:


GOOD z_em. Thanks for your opinions. Metal Detector's wrong. bed of roses wrong, but maybe correct. For clownfish, good way of analyzing it. can opener, quite correct. car's wrong. knife correct.

The rest, I guess you don't feel me. LOL. :'(
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