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Postby Solace » Feb 15th, '09, 23:58

Complex algorithms in a different language,
Equations create a mathematicians anguish,
Numbers enrage this, and cages mankind,
Evolution is changing, revising that line,
That's why some can't go back and forget,
Regret decisions made, plans drawers sweat,
Bore the best, core of rest, no improvement,
Ignorant people get advice but they don't use it,
It's my amusement, the foolish get used and,
Thrown in an unknown game, a.k.a abused man,
The bruised hand, and it sadly only started,
Where dreams happen, yet they departed.

It may be a little abstract so just post asking what some lines mean if you don't understand, and I steer off subject. Wrote this 3-4 minutes.
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Requiem » Feb 16th, '09, 00:07

oooh, complexity, i liked it man :y:
structure was flawless man. i loved the rhymes. i really liked it man, no more to be said. that aka abused man line is sick as hell.
great job :y:
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '09, 00:09

Ice Killa wrote:oooh, complexity, i liked it man :y:
structure was flawless man. i loved the rhymes. i really liked it man, no more to be said. that aka abused man line is sick as hell.
great job :y:

Damn, thanks dude :happy:
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Robbie G » Feb 16th, '09, 00:11

The rhymes were really good but I can't picture this being spit. :sweating:
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '09, 00:17

Shady Babie wrote:The rhymes were really good but I can't picture this being spit. :sweating:

Thanks dude, and by that im guessing it didnt flow to you?
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Robbie G » Feb 16th, '09, 01:10

Epiphany wrote:
Shady Babie wrote:The rhymes were really good but I can't picture this being spit. :sweating:

Thanks dude, and by that im guessing it didnt flow to you?



Yeah, almost seemed like too many big words but idk lol.
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '09, 01:12

Shady Babie wrote:
Epiphany wrote:
Shady Babie wrote:The rhymes were really good but I can't picture this being spit. :sweating:

Thanks dude, and by that im guessing it didnt flow to you?



Yeah, almost seemed like too many big words but idk lol.

lol okay, well i flow it fine but whatever :8)
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Re: Random Shit

Postby gutawafang » Feb 16th, '09, 02:10

Epiphany, I guess you were influenced by Mathematics when you made this. MAYBE you wrote it in your Math class??? :y:
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '09, 02:24

gutawafang wrote:Epiphany, I guess you were influenced by Mathematics when you made this. MAYBE you wrote it in your Math class??? :y:

I dont have math class on the weekend, and no i just wrote it in a couple minutes in my room. This has nothing to do with math either so yeah...Thanks for checking it
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