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Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 16th, '09, 06:38

bloodied billions and trillions of little microscopic rappers
grab the clapper, blast with anger, all you hear is pitty patter
does it matter, love my laughter, all you hear is little shots
your tickles do not stop my shots from slicing you with this hot
lyrical drops, don't stop spittin' punchlines at nautical knots
topical spots swap nuclear energy like the sun when I got
my drops tightened and brightened with lightened agression
cause a depression, punchlines hit America in a recession
lyrical confessions reveal the feelings I hid with a seal
get rid of the real, replace with something the fake can feel
spillin' adrenaline onto the paper, slice my skin with razors
lyrical lasers guide me in favor to make sure I have the best flavor
in my rhyme book container, like a painter I brush the desk
to rush the rest of my work to perfection, if not I'll snap my neck
grab the tech and blast the next person who wanna tempt me
I'm an MC with venomous deeds, agenda is to make you bleed
take your needs and swallow it, regurgitate, have you borrow it
your sorrow fits the hollow tips, cause' of the fuckin' shit
you all want me to spit, that's it, I'm through being a puppet
fuck it, you're lucky I won't see a meteor and throw you towards it
it's boring, I can't stand this land of wack MC's, writin' with hands
you fighting with bland punchlines back and forth, now understand
I'm so sick and tired, my tech is tired, my rhymes are silenced
I've used way to much violence, to be honest I appeal to an audiance
you appeal in the wackest sense, this track is bent in flames, my name
will stay in the rhyme hall of fame until somebody bashes my brain.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Random Shit

Postby gutawafang » Feb 16th, '09, 06:42

As we discussed, RECORD this shit. Well... yeah, i know u working on it! HAHA! :happy:
Happy to read all this in one chunk! :happy:

9.9/10.
I feel it.
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '09, 06:43

It was good but i felt it had no meaning at all, just rhyming for rhyming. I didnt get the rhyme scheme here:

"grab the tech and blast the next person who wanna tempt me
I'm an MC with venomous deeds, agenda is to make you bleed
take your needs and swallow it, regurgitate, have you borrow it
your sorrow fits the hollow tips, cause' of the fuckin' shit
you all want me to spit, that's it, I'm through being a puppet
fuck it, you're lucky I won't see a meteor and throw you towards it"

i felt it changed there and then after just went back.

What i got from it:
Your a great rapper who causes controversy and you can kill or something.
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Re: Random Shit

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 16th, '09, 06:44

I really have no idea what I was doing, hence ''Random Shit''
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '09, 06:48

MC Anonymous wrote:I really have no idea what I was doing, hence ''Random Shit''

rofl alright :y:
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Re: Random Shit

Postby gutawafang » Feb 16th, '09, 06:56

NEVERTHELESS I like this! :happy:
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