Ignorance is bliss for instance!!! !!!

[Purple23Haze]

Ignorance is bliss! I just dismissed! 2 thirds the earth in an instant
Pissin in the wind has a consequence piss on the chin for instance
Remember this ominous dominance wrong for this but I’ll give you a rash
Upon wronging this take a hit from the bong I’m wanting this
Conscious rap long for it? cause I long for that strong in laps
First to place last to race once I passed it was war half way
Worst disgrace was words in strength my word play earns chains
If in the lowest ranks frozen banks aint token dank. Awoken, wait!
Chevy Chase choking on heavy spray paint, make and taint,
And a word from our sponsors don’t date rape or rape
Infiltrate the government see what they encumbered with
They won’t tell so we have raise hell make the sick well
take a drink from the magic well prey do tell crazed fool pale
obviously sick like this lyric nit pick it I don’t give a shit explicit

How come when I wanna flow shit sounds like I’m tryin to be a hero
I’m the wackness Shapero weirdo with a beard yo last part was me I need sheers so
Back up off me I’m writin right on spot see start a line with a dot G
Losers never gain but think they reign like water enjoy some peach cobbler
Sit back stop fuckin your daughter

I’m tryna seek out a method, of movin thru this maze without effort
I’m far from an expert but I will be by the time my beard is peppered
I’ve learned from many moves made, and many dues paid
That many dudes stray and who say what truth plays
I'm still able to find my way, even when I lose faith
With a stiff upper lip I'm crackin the whip with a painful smile,
till the blues fade to black salted skies let em all start a dog pile
I maintain, and build with those on the same wavelength (The mentally ill)
But the main aim,.. is to get us all to that same place, which happens in time and space
And weather the storm like a ships captain, with a braveface
No matter what typa shit happens, if we all on the same page
We can overcome all the bullshit actions, distractin us, to make change
And give strength to those that lack the hammers and forge, to shape fate!

[B.A.D.]

why the fuck you people don't do audio???

that shit's hot

[Ka0t1c]

i liked the second verse cuz it made sense, at least to me than the first one. i think you did real well for yourself, the thing that i think u should absolutely avoid is using the same rhymes, especially if that word you use again is at the end of the line. for example instant and instance, also you used the word "same" 3 times on your second verse. but it's still a good piece 8/10 for your second verse

[gutawafang]

NICE.

Structure's there. Flow's there. First sentence captivates readers.

I loved it yo. Yeah, record.

[Solace]

i see someones finally stepping it up

[Purple23Haze]

Thanx for all the feed back I'm glad this one took well
I will put in audio once I can figure a beat with FL
BTW I don't know if this is spamming but how do I get samples on fruity loops

[Solace]

Thanx for all the feed back I'm glad this one took well
I will put in audio once I can figure a beat with FL
BTW I don't know if this is spamming but how do I get samples on fruity loops

maybe you should just use someone elses beats before using your own, when you dont even know how to make them, you know?

[gutawafang]

Thanx for all the feed back I'm glad this one took well
I will put in audio once I can figure a beat with FL
BTW I don't know if this is spamming but how do I get samples on fruity loops

maybe you should just use someone elses beats before using your own, when you dont even know how to make them, you know?

That's what people always do.

[Purple23Haze]

I guess I could do that meanwhile!!

[gutawafang]

I guess I could do that meanwhile!!

Great! We look forward to your records!