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The Mirror

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 22nd, '09, 04:45

Gunshot is fired, richochets off the arm
Passes wrong, look back, and you see it's gone
walking becomes horizontal, text is backwards
writing S.C.I.R.Y.L so I can say it forwards
pacing highways, cars crash into me, light
beams reflect instantly, spectrum is white
stand infront, infinite reflection in my sight
rhyme punchlines, richochets all it's might
friction melts glass, combustion explodes
shards of me form a bunch of new clones
my seeds reap, a girl is combing her hair
she left, she's still there, image is snared
she came back, READ RUOY on her chest
wait, it's the reflection, now hear the text
death is next, flames begin to ignite her breasts
light the rest of her house till ash is left
all the while, reflection of her is still stagnant
blood stains on her palms, karma is absent
then I reach out, step into another frame
reflection of my corner sees a window pane
outside, a car window, 6 year old touchin'
I shatter into pieces, glass shards brushin
I see water reflecting the face of the evil
corperations drown underneath the people
As I look upon myself, hung on a shelf
near the wealth, poor, car, hidden in stealth
an infinite reflection, I can never see me
cause I never see the inside of me really....
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Feb 23rd, '09, 15:17, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: The Mirror

Postby James R. » Feb 22nd, '09, 04:47

The concept is crazy. This would be really hard to do on audio I think lol. But as text it's hot man. Fed everything on MSN more or less. Love conceptual tracks.
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Re: The Mirror

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 22nd, '09, 04:50

James R. wrote:The concept is crazy. This would be really hard to do on audio I think lol. But as text it's hot man. Fed everything on MSN more or less. Love conceptual tracks.

:y: Thanks bro
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Re: The Mirror

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Feb 22nd, '09, 04:54

i liked this a lot it was pretty awesome :8)
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Re: The Mirror

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 22nd, '09, 04:55

¤°~ Jose ~¤°© wrote:i liked this a lot it was pretty awesome :8)

thanks dude :y:
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Re: The Mirror

Postby rahul.never2far » Feb 22nd, '09, 08:31

It was crazy... loved it...
I've just started writing... learned a lot from it :worship:
Keep the good work up buddy :y:
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Re: The Mirror

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 22nd, '09, 16:08

rahul.never2far wrote:It was crazy... loved it...
I've just started writing... learned a lot from it :worship:
Keep the good work up buddy :y:

Glad you can learn from my piece :y:
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Re: The Mirror

Postby notoriouS-K-M » Feb 22nd, '09, 18:04

walking becomes horizontal, text is backwards
writing S.C.I.R.Y.L so I can say it forwards
wow...............dude like always....a great piece.....took me three reads to understand it more or less though.
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Re: The Mirror

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 22nd, '09, 18:14

notoriouS-K-M wrote:
walking becomes horizontal, text is backwards
writing S.C.I.R.Y.L so I can say it forwards
wow...............dude like always....a great piece.....took me three reads to understand it more or less though.

Haha thanks bro :y:
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Re: The Mirror

Postby Solace » Feb 22nd, '09, 18:23

Woah dude that was crazy. I dont know why but it gave me chills at the end. Really good 10/10 :y:
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Re: The Mirror

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 22nd, '09, 18:37

Epiphany wrote:Woah dude that was crazy. I dont know why but it gave me chills at the end. Really good 10/10 :y:

Thanks dude :y:
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Re: The Mirror

Postby mcZu » Feb 22nd, '09, 22:47

Loved the concept, loved the Rewind like influence you had going in there. :y:
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Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 23rd, '09, 03:49

mcZu wrote:Loved the concept, loved the Rewind like influence you had going in there. :y:

Thanks bro :flower:
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Re: The Mirror

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 23rd, '09, 05:33

READ ROUY on her chest

i don't get that part, if ROUY means YOUR then it should be RUOY
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: The Mirror

Postby gutawafang » Feb 23rd, '09, 08:17

Cool shit. I love it, period. :happy:
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