F.L.A.M.E.Z.

[¤°~ Jose ~¤°©]

just thought i'd write something hehe..

Flamez the spit firing latino heat packin' shitloads of ammunition
Loaded with ambition a mystical magician appearin' its an apparition
A ghostly creature on a mission to neutralize eliminating my competition
My majestic presence being felt can't u see the recognition of my vividness
Expressin' emotions thru finesse lyrics you step to me and feel my lividness
Zeus like anger thunderin' down in success i continue to progress and produce
Zippin' up my past its the present juices flowin' inside me when i break loose
Excretin' toxic waste the same way i seduce takin' the spaceship around Uranus
Makin' Mysterious appearances i may be ignoramus at times but i'm super famous
Aggravated assault is the crime i created i'm aimlessly moving around coast to coast
Lighting my path towards stardom the host of hip-hop cookin' delicious beef roast
Fake so called rappers are burnt toast this a backdraft a flashover you've been engrossed

[Urban Punk]

It flowed well and I loved the vocab… nice work dude keep it up

[¤°~ Jose ~¤°©]

thanx for the feed man

[mcZu]

Pretty dope, flow was off at some points and you might work on the structure, your vocab is good, lyrics overall are dope

Flamez the spit firing latino heat packin' shitloads of ammunition
Loaded with ambition a mystical magician appearin' its an apparition
A ghostly creature on a mission to neutralize eliminating my competition
My majestic presence being felt can't u see the recognition of my vividness
Expressin' emotions thru finesse lyrics you step to me and feel my lividness
Zeus like anger thunderin' down in success i continue to progress and produce
Zippin' up my past its the present juices flowin' inside me when i break loose
Excretin' toxic waste the same way i seduce takin' the spaceship around Uranus
Makin' Mysterious appearances i may be ignoramus at times but i'm super famous
Aggravated assault is the crime i created i'm aimlessly moving around coast to coast
Lighting my path towards stardom the host of hip-hop cookin' delicious beef roast
Fake so called rappers are burnt toast this a backdraft a flashover you've been engrossed

That was dope what you did there, spelling F.L.A.M.E.Z and then backwards
Good job and keep dropping

[¤°~ Jose ~¤°©]

thanx for checkin' this out man..thought nobody would notice Flamez going forwards and backwards haha = P

[gutawafang]

VOCAB was perfect.

Flow was there. Structure's .

FLAMEZ!

[¤°~ Jose ~¤°©]

thanx man